Yoshi1999's Choose wisely game! (OVER, Thanks For Playing!)

Chapter 11: The End Part 2

Razor steps up to the tilting elevator and punches in a code. As he punches in the last number he has a flash back. He remembers talking at the airport with White Yoshi he looked up to see what time to get on his flight but all he saw were eight colors. Razor stared blankly at the numbers. White Yoshi asked Razor what was wrong. Razor quickly blinked and said " I'm fine." Razor started walking with White Yoshi to where he thought his flight was. As he walked a man ran into him. He looked up to see Eboy. Eboy apologized and started walking the other way, but they both made it to the right plane. Razor stopped having his flashback " He sent me a clue at the airport, he gave me the colors!" The elevator opened and all of you got on the elevator while Mr.M's guards guarded us and others checked out the ruins of Eboy's Temple. The elevator slowly screeched down the long tunnel until it came to a abrupt stop. The doors opened. "The long hallway with flickering lights is inviting" gg1996 joked. We all pulled out our weapons.  Toblet looked back and noticed the elevator told them when it was last used. On the side it said ELEVATOR LAST USED - 15 SECONDS AGO. He wondered why that was needed. At the end of the hallway was a large metal door. With no hassle it opened. There were hundreds of TV's all lined up in a row. All showing what we were doing before the events of the Crash.  Mr.M put his head down. " I didn't tell you all the truth, I have been lying to you all this time. Don't worry I'm not working for them it's just, This game of mine wasn't exactly real. I chose all of you so you could help me stop Eboy. I lied to Eboy over a message so he would think you are worth money, so he would crash your plane right in the coordinates I needed you to crash. I'm so sorry" WE all looked at him with pure anger. GogogoGreg screamed. "How did he get video of us so early before our plane crash!" Mr.M started to think. " I-I-I have no idea." You should." Eboy had a derringer to Mr.M. I knew all along you were playing me. But I knew you would start to like these kids, and be nice, and get them out of harms way. WHEN YOU HARMED THEM IN THE FIRST PLACE! Now To start my revolution i needed some publicity so I researched all of you and i found this. All the TV's changed to each and every one of your perfect records. You were all goodie goodie's. But one thing didn't add up, Why Mr.M did you want them to team up with a scum thief like Pokemaster? Mr.M's eyes grew wide. I thought you did that. A count down of the building started going off 30 MINUTES UNTIL IMPLOSION!!! Eboy screamed "this entire building is going to implode with all the dirt above us!" We all ran to The Elevator toblet noticed something. ELEVATOR LAST USED- 1 MINUTE AGO. toblet pulled out his gun. Someones here......... "You are correct" The pilot walked up the hall and said "Miss me?" He pulled out a contraption and pressed a button. The lights went out. when they went back on he was holding a giant magnet that had all our guns. My late assassin and I snuck into Mr.M's mansion and put metal on every gun! Smart huh? He pulled out a gun and smiled. he took a shot. It hit who we would least expect. Eboy's body hit the ground.The pilot Stats speaking " That fool was going to just let me die. You were the people that were going to do it. Luckily for me, I was smart enough to trigger his gun to only shoot a blank, so yes it skimmed my head. And I was bloody so i looked as dead as night. And you swept my body under the rug! BUT I'M BACK!. And I will laugh as each and every one of you go down as this building crumbles. But first we should get to know each other my name is. Elijah Banks, pleased to meet you! Now before we all plummet into earth's core. Let's get rid of the old man Mr.Malcolm! Elijah lifts up a pistol and puts his finger on the trigger. Luigi Party! Notices a bag on the floor near Frederica.  Luigi points to the bag and we stare down at it. Luigi Party has a Flashback. Luigi Party is sitting on the plane, he looks over and see's a Sign that says EMERGENCY KIT. He sees the bag near Frederica clunking against the wall underneath the sign. Back in reality Luigi Party gets everyone's attention. they smile.

PAUSE.
You need to figure out what is in the bag. I gave a big hint in Luigi Party's Flashback. Good luck. Remember look at very old post from when the game started back in July.


 
Chapter 11: The End  Part 3, The Final Part

Luigi Party dives onto the bag, he pulls out the flare gun and takes a shot. It hits Elijah's hand, he drops the gun. We hear a scratchy voice on the speaker, 5 MINUTES UNTIL IMPLOSION! Eboy softly mumbles on the ground" you are all just pieces to the puzzle we are almost at the end. I never really needed my guards, notice when i called my car the jet blew up after, it was remote controlled, I have more power than you even know, no matter what happens the puzzle will never be fully finished." Eboy closes his eyes the blood pouring out of his stomach. Elijah stands up "I did not come all the way down here to die with you scums! he pulls out a gun and runs to the elevator. Good bye. the elevator doors shut. Ieuan tries to open the elevator door but it is busted. We all run to the TV room as Eboy struggles to breathe he softly says" there is one other way out try to find it. But i warn you as long as Mr.Malcolm is alive people will come after you, even the F.B.I they think Mr.M is a criminal who destroyed an ancient temple, and their innocent inhabitants. We hear the speaker "AREA IMPLODING, AREA IMPLODING. the ceiling crumbles. Ieuan starts to run from a crumbling piece of ceiling but it hits him. Toblet sees and runs after him. Ieuan screams no stop! a giant pile of dirt goes all over Ieuan and is just an inch away from toblet. Toblet runs to Ieuan toblet screams " CRAP there is too much dirt! she gets to his face but it is too late. Ieuan was lying there dead. Toblet gets up. Death screams "Holy crap!" the middle of the base completely implodes. Vampire is standing in the middle, she starts to fall and shoots an icicle. she holds on as the floor behind her turns into dirt, rock, and fire. the fire starts to melt the icicle as it is about to melt Death grabs her hand. "hold on", Vampire Girl's hands are wet and slippery from the icicle. Death starts to lose his grip. Death screams "WE WILL NOT LOSE ANOTHER!" Vampire girl closes her eyes as Death struggles to pull her up, the heat burning his face. Vampire girl notices Death is starting to pass out from the intense heat and debris falling on him. To save him from falling in, she slowly lets go of his hand. Death screams "NO!" She closes her eyes and tells him to look away." he looks away and looks back shes gone. The remaining survivors. (Gameguy1996, Gogogogreg, Toblet, Death, Luigi Party!, Mr.M and -S) -S sees a door on the other side of the door, he runs and jump to the middle of the hole he sticks his two golden daggers in the quickly breaking ceiling, he uses them like monkey bars. He gets to the door and opens it, he sees another elevator. Gogogogreg jumps onto the first dagger and swings to the next, one by one each of you do what -S did. But not Mr.M he sits on the other side and screams " With me alive i will just make put you in harms way, Leave Now!" you all hesitantly walk into the elevator and as your about to close the door you see Mr.M pull out his magnum and fire at the suffering Eboy. Mr.M smiles at you all as a tear drops from his eye. you all start to softly cry. -S says "I'm sorry this all happened to you". The elevator finally reaches the top after a 15 minute ride up. The elevator drops you off in the middle of Eboy's Destroyed Temple. A police helicopter and car  are in the front. they see all of you and notice you are the survivors of the plane crash. They fly you all back to the airport. You all look at one another with an eerie face. You all know Elijah is still alive, you all know he will come after each and every one of you, for what reason, all you wanted to do was go to a mountain resort, and know you are being hunted down by the person who was flying you to it. You know Elijah is coming!


I will post an epilogue later, your last choosing is how did you like the game ( beside there being such long waits for the next chapter.)
On a scale of 1-10 how did you like the game. And if i make sure to post quicker would you ever consider playing another game of Choose Wisely?
And also tell me flaws you have with the game (I can take criticism)

And the epilogue will wrap up a few unanswered things.

 
I'd rate it 8.5/10, as it was very fun to choose how the story turned out. A couple suggestions: players should be replaced. I mean, most people who signed up for the game are now inactive (Greg, LP, Yi, etc.). Make each player's choice actually matter! Like, maybe instead of having a majority rules type thing, everybody's votes could be seperate or something like that.

And yes, I would play another game of Choose Wisely (probably...)
 
Death said:
I'd rate it 8.5/10, as it was very fun to choose how the story turned out. A couple suggestions: players should be replaced. I mean, most people who signed up for the game are now inactive (Greg, LP, Yi, etc.). Make each player's choice actually matter! Like, maybe instead of having a majority rules type thing, everybody's votes could be seperate or something like that.

And yes, I would play another game of Choose Wisely (probably...)
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Cool ,and I like those ideas!
 
I TRANSFORMED INTO A BAT AND FLEW AWAY BEFORE I APPARENTLY DIED! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!

The game was somewhat fun. I'd rate the game 8 out of 10.

A flaw the game had is that I couldn't really understand the story because of grammar. I was kind of confused during the game but it kinda improved throughout the game though. Also, as the others said, you should've killed off those who are currently inactive on this forum.

And, I would be more than delighted to join if you plan on making another game of Choose Wisely.
 
9/10
I really enjoyed the game and I appreciate the fact that you put so much effort into it. There's been many games I've joined where people have simply given up on it. Just a few things, though:

1) How are the people who get killed decided? Is it random or do you decide while writing the story? - This is just a suggestion, but if you can't kill the inactive people, you can always make them enemies; or make them mysteriously disappear and take a new role later on in the game, friendly or not.
2) I know you watch the walking dead - but have you seen the game? That should give you a few ideas. Also don't forget, you aren't limited to two options.
3) It would have been nicer if the choices were more meaningful. Nothing really happens when making the right or wrong decisions. To make it more action-packed, you could force people to choose between two players which should die and which should live. Etc...
4) Like I said in one of my posts a few weeks ago, one of the people killed could be one of the people who got the choice wrong.
5) What could happen instead of people constantly jumping on bandwagons and going along with other people's choices, is instead, we could PM you our choices, rather than posting them in public. That way it's more interesting and a good way to test people.
6) You could have a hp system where everyone has lives. A certain number of wrong choices means they're eliminated, which means the wisest players are the winners. That would make it a bit more skill-based rather than the 'go with the flow' type of game-play.
7) Maybe we could do something else apart from just picking an option. I feel as if players need to be more involved. For a lot of time and effort put into a long story line, it's a shame for people to just go "pick this option" and not do anything else.

There's a few ideas for a future game anyway~ I can't criticize your English because you're definitely improving which is the most important thing. :) Nevertheless, it was great to play and I would love to join another, given the opportunity.
 
Epilogue

2 Years Later

Gogogogreg has moved on from his experiences and is now an architect, he goes deep into tombs and savages priceless artifacts. Although over the past 2 years you have lost contact with him. He was in Egypt, searching in tombs when he completely vanished. All that was found in the tomb he was searching in was a giant pile of sand in a deep pit. Many people think he fell into the sandy pit. But you all think Elijah got to him.

Luigi Part moved to France and bought a small house on a giant hill. But one day he also up and vanished. His neighbors say he got in his car one day and literally drove out of sight. there was a note in his house that read.
"You will always forget the happy times, but the terrible ones live forever"

Toblet and Death are both F.B.I agents who both work around the United States. They are both living in Boston, Massachusetts on a terrorist mission. But during that time, they took a trip to New York. Death wanted to see Toadette's grave. He sat there with Toblet for hours. As they both sat there deeply crying, - S got out of a white Limo and walked over to them. "do you guys have any interest in finding Elijah?" You both look up. "He has been spotted in London. He has also been in contact with a terrorist in your case, in Boston, Massachusetts." So are you guys up for it? you both look at each other.

Gameguy1996 is a C.I.A Agent, he was deployed to go to Eboy's Temple and the remains of his underground dome. At the temple he found Leafeons decomposed body he closed his eyes and called people over. Leafeon deserved a proper burial. In the Dome Gg1996 coudln't look for Vampire girl the hole she fell in was to deep. He looked down and wondered if there was any way she avoided the fire and survived. Gg1996 got people to take Ieuan's body away. Gg1996 looked everywhere for Mr.M's body, but it was no where to be found,  As Gg1996 was about to leave he found a note taped to one of the broken T.V's. It read.

"Dear Gameguy
  I had to pretend to die, I knew Elijah would be watching you, but if i was alive he would of killed all of you. I had to pretend to die.
I'm so sorry. But i need to let you guys know. Eboy was never the true leader of the "Revolution" it was Elijah. But Elijah lied through his teeth to Eboy. All Elijah wants is money and revenge. Revenge on me and 5 other men. I will explain it more later. I hope to see you soon. And You should meet up with Toblet, Death, and -S, they are all in Boston, Massachusetts. Good Luck, and I never found Vampire girl in the hole. She could have Left when I wasn't looking. I don't know. But i bet she is hiding. I will let you know where I am when you arrive in Boston. I hope you accept this mission. The reason I know it's you is my guards and I are watching you to make sure you are safe! good bye for now.
    Sincerely,
            Mr.Malcolm"



Would you like to continue this game in a month or so?  Mr.Malcolms Choose Wisely Game: Revenge of Elijah Banks. ( this would be faster, better, and more action packed than this one)

You may all vote. And you may get more people to join .I will tell you how many people may play, you may decide if you want to play.

1. Gg1996 - choose if you want to play
2. Vampire Girl- Choose if you want to play
3. Toblet- Choose if you want to play
4. Death- Choose if you want to play
5. -S- ANY IDEAS OF WHO ON THIS FORUM COULD PORTRAY HIM WELL?

Thank you for playing Yoshi1999's Choose Wisely game. And In a month or so, I hope you join me for the 2nd one.
 
Now 4 spots are reserved but 16 more people may join. You have a long time to join. So you should definitely look around this topic or ask people who played it, if you should join!
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2. Toblet
3. Frederica Bernkastel
4. Death(?)
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7. PeachandYoshi
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