Super Circuit

Which is your favorite to win?

  • Peach

    Votes: 1 100.0%
  • Bowser

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    1
It's SUNDAY SUNDAY SUNDAY!!! Super Circuit time. I'll try finishing this as fat as I can cause I wanna get back to watching Chuggaconroy's Pokemon Crystal Let's Play. Anyway, have you ever played Thrillville before? And played the Saucer Soccer mini-game? If you have then this chapter is going to feel very familiar...
CHAPTER 10!

Anyway last time on Super Circuit...
Dry Bones entered the game.
A Shine Sprint event in Waluigi Coloseeum led to the Blue Team quashing their losing streak, but no one went home.

Torque: You guys ready? I'm doing something new this time. Today you're playing a game I call Kart Soccer!
Mario: Kart Soccer?
Torque: Yep. You're going to use your kart to push a giant soccer ball into the other teams goal. The team with the most points after the 2nd half wins the game. Since the Blue Team won the last challenge, they get a slightly shortened goal, making it harder for the Red Team to score.
Bowser: I'll be goalie. Bring it on!
Torque: That won't be neccessary Bowser. Release the Kritters!
Wario: So we have Kritters as our goalies?
Torque: That's right. So get ready to play.
Author's Note: Mario Kart, Super Mario Strikers, and Thrillville in one chapter. Wow! And one last thing, we're still in Waluigi Stadium.
Wario takes the ball and passes it to Toad.
Toad: Woah! -dodges Green Shell- Who threw that?
Bowser: Not me -throws Red Shell-
Toad: Uh-oh -loses ball-
Mario: Let's-a go! -shoots-
Kritter: -blocks-
Bowser: Grr... -rams into post-
Dry Bones: -pushes ball into goal-
Torque: GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!
Red Team: 1
Blue Team: 0
The first half continues without much excitement. But with one minute to go...
DK: -drives like a madman towards the goal-
Peach: -throws Blue Shell-
DK: Almost there... -explodes-
Peach: Yes! -gets ball- Scoring time.
Wario: Stop her!
Bob-ombs, shells, and banana peels, oh my! But nothing stops Peach.
Torque: Peach is taking it to the net she's going for the goal, and GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!
Red Team: 2
Blue: Team: 0
Torque: And that's the first half. The Red Team's winning by two, and the Blue Team has a smaller net for the Red Team to score in!

Well it's time to call it cliffhanger for now. Wednesday I'll finish Chapter 10. And If I still have the motivation after doing that I guess we'll put in Chapter 11 as well.
 
Since I don't have school today, let's make the best of a good situatuion!
CHAPTER 10 and 1/2!
I just discovered the additioanl smileys box today, so I'll be using that for all the characters that have smileys.
:mario: This is too easy. We're gonna win!
:kingboo: You said it.
:mbowser: I'm not sure, they don't give up easily.
Author's Note: I'm using Mecha Bowser for Bowser because there was no Bowser smiley.
:luigi: We've gotta get it together or we lose.
:wario: You may be right.
Torque: everyone ready? Let's go!
The Blue Team gets the ball to start the second half.
:waluigi: I'm open!
:wario: Just let me handle it.
Torque: He's going in for the shot, he's taking it and stopped by Kritter!
The rest of the second half carries on without a lot of excitement. But then...
:drybones: Here I go.
Torque: He's taking it the net, and he scores! GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAL!
Red Team: 3
Blue Team: 0
Torque: And that's game! Red Team wins and Blue Team has to send someone home.

That night...
Torque: I don't think it's neccesary, but I'll read the votes anyway.
Luigi
2 votes Toad
4 votes Wario
Torque: Well that's that.

NOW Wario's gone. And since you've been so good, I'll treat you to...
CHAPTER 11!
:toad: Now what?
:waluigi: We've gotta break up the Red Team.
:koopa: How on earth do we do that?
:waluigi: I'll think of something.
Red Team...
:yoshi: We keep winning and winning.
:mbowser: We just got our winning streak started again after the last game.
:kingboo: Yeah you're getting ahead of yourself.
Torque: Attention crash test dummies, report to Waluigi Stadium at once!
At the Stadium...
Torque: Hello Crash Test Dummies, today's challenge will be a race event, 3 laps here, 2 laps at Wario Coloseeum, then 2 Laps through Wario Coloseeum in Mirror Mode. Snice Red Team has one extra racer, they'll have to sit one racer out each race.
Red sits out Peach
Torque: Ready, GO!
Mario takes the lead, followed by Luigi and Toad.
:toad: Take this! -throws Red Shell-
:mario: Ahh!
Luigi takes 1st and Toad takes 2nd as Mario drops to 4th.

Ok this is taking me forever to write, so I think I'll cut it here. I'll finish it later.
Back to the story!
:luigi: This is easy!
:waluigi: Hey move over!
:toad: Calm down we're on the same side!
:waluigi: It's my stadium though!
:mbowser: Betcha they won't see this coming... -hurls spiky shell-
:toad: :luigi: :waluigi: Oh no! -all get knocked aside-
Torque: It's the final lap and Bowser's got a huge lead! Luigi's got a firm hold on 2nd, and Waluigi and Mario are fighting for 3rd.
:waluigi: Beat it Mario!
:mario: Beat this! Ta-Ta! -drops Bob-omb and floors it-
:waluigi: Crud! -blows up-
Torque: That. Is going to hurt. In the morning.
Author's Note: I think. That putting random periods. Gives the ending. A tiny bit. More emphasis.
Torque: And that's it. Standings time.
1st: Bowser-15
2nd: Luigi-12
3rd: Mario-10
4th: Waluigi-8
5th: Toad-7
6th: King Boo-6
7th: DK-5
8th: Diddy-4
9th: Shy Guy-3
10th: Yoshi-2
11th: Koopa-1
12th: None

Wow I realized just now It's the BLUE team that has an extra racer not Red. I R TTLY SMRT.

Red Team: 36
Blue Team: 37

Scores after the regular race through Wario Coloseeum which I'm too lazy to post about.

Red Team: 79
Blue Team: 70

Torque: Looks at watch. Ooh we're running out of time, so Red Team wins!
Blue Team: WHAT!
Torque: Ordinally We'd vote someone out, but I'll just take out the person who came in last for Blue Team. Diddy Kong. Sorry but you've reached the end of your road.

The end of your road. That's Torque's catchphrase for this story. But that aside, I'll be taking a break from this story, because I'm the author and I can do that. I'll be back in two weeks. See you then.
 
And... we're back! We're going on with the show!
Chapter 12!
Torque: Everyone ready?
:shyguy:  Yeah. What's going on?
Torque: I'm breaking up the teams now! Everyone for themself.
:luigi: Aww...
Torque: Now follow me!
After walking for hours...
:koopa: This is Baby Park right?
Torque: Yep, with such a tiny surface area, completely open space, and a items everywhere, it makes the perfect area for a balloon battle!
:waluigi: :yoshi: really?!
Torque: Yep! And I'm also getting rid of 3 of you this time! First three to lose all their balloons are out of the game.
Everyone is in shock.
Torque: Don't be so surprised, I intend to keep you on your toes throughout the second half of the game.
Auhtor's Note: Which always seems shorter then the first half of the game.
Torque: Ready? Go!
Everyone has 5 balloons and is armed with 1 Red Shell.
:diddykong: -throws shell at Bowser, but hits the guard rail-
:mbowser: hahaha you can't do anything right huh? -tosses shell-
:diddykong: Ow -losses balloon, then get's hit by 4 more shells- What gives?
Torque: Diddy's out of the competition!
Hour's pass with most players still having 2 balloons.
Torque: Ugh this is taking forever! I know... RELEASE THE CHAIN CHOMP!!!
:kingboo: :eek:
:waluigi:  :eek:
:mario: :eek:
:shyguy:  :eek:
The Chain Chomp goes around destroying everyone and KOing Yoshi.
Torque: Two down one to go!
:koopa: Uh-oh... -gets KOd by Chain Chomp-
Torque: Well that's that I guess. Find your own way out crash test dummies!

Back to doing what I do best. Improvise story dialouge! I'll be puting a new poll up later today or tomorrow.
 
And on the 2 month anniversary of the GGR season 1 officialy ending we have...
Chapter 13!
Wow this story is really going by faster then I expected. Also since just using the smilies for the characters just takes forever and I'm already side-tracked enough since I'm watching Chuggaconroy's LP of Super Mario Sunshine, I'm not going to be using the smiley's anymore. So now that that is done... Let's-a go!

Torque: This is going to be very fun. New Battle type today!
Bowser: What is it this time?
Torque: Well before I get into that I've got a piece of good news!
Dry Bones: What is it?
Torque: We've got another driver in this race!
Daisy: I told you I'd be back.
Waluigi: -gulp-
Torque: Now back to the game. Today is a Bob-omb Blast contest inside Coconut Mall.
Author's Note: ... There was something I was going to put here but I forgot.
Torque: Bob-omb Blasts are simple. Throw Bob-ombs at your opponents to score points. The Bob-ombs explode the second they hit the ground. Most points after 30 minutes wins invincibility. NOW GO!

The first few minutes have little action.
Bowser: Ha-ha! -throws Bob-omb at Peach-
Peach: Ah!
Luigi: Uh-oh...
Shy Guy: :-(
Bowser: -hits Luigi and Shy Guy with one Bob-omb.-
Bowser: Bwahaha! This is too easy!
On the other side of the mall...
Daisy: Bob-ombs away! -hurls Bob-omb-
Mario: -dodges easily-
Dry Bones: -flips out from explosion-
Current Standings:
Bowser: 3
Daisy: 1
Everyone else: Absolutely nothing!
Torque: 10 minutes left.
Waluigi: uh-oh. Better do something... -blows self up-
Bowser: Not to smart eh? -hurls 2 bob-ombs-
Waluigi: Ack! -blows up twice? Illogical!-
Torque: Time! Standigs time!
First: Bowser
Second: Daisy
Third: Everyone else.
-static-
Torque: These people can't do anything right!
-back-
Torque: Lot's of good voting here. Let's see how you did vote.
Waluigi
Waluigi
Mario
Mario
Mario
Luigi
Dry Bones
Dry Bones
Daisy
Mario: What? WHAT?! Why?! How?! HOW?!
Torque: HAHAHAHA Enough with your hardcore freakout Mario. I'm not getting rid of anyone tonight. It was a reward challenge!
Bowser: Ooh! What's my reward!
Torque: This check for $2500!
Bowser: Sweet.

With 10 characters in the race, We're going to be here for a while. I'm not going anywhere, but we will have to wait till Sunday to do this.
 
Back to work I go!
CHAPTER 14?
Bowser: I'm PUMPED for this challegne!
Torque: Glad someone's excited! But it's time to crush your excitement and get rid of two of you right here right now before we even start! Mario! Waluigi! Pack your bags and hit the road!
Mario: What?!
Waluigi: Huwha?!
Great... my computer's lagging like nuts. I'll try again tommorrow.


This time with 10% less laggage!
The Real Chapter 14!

Torque: With Mario & Waluigi gone, we're gonna have fun!
Peach: How?
Torque: Race through the mall, up to DK Jungle, up and around DK Summit, then back to the mall. And last person here get's canned! GO!
Author's Note: I ask for less laggage, and they give me more!
On the way to DK Jungle...
Daisy: This seems thicker then before.
DB: Who cares?
King Boo: Outta our way.
-static-
King Boo: Me and Dry Bones working together is great! Can't see why we didn't think of this before!
-back-
Bowser: Woah! -gets shot out of cannon-
Peach: Looks like this the only way to the summit.
Luigi: What's stopping us then.

Current Standings at DK Summit
1st- Bowser
2nd- Peach
3rd- Luigi
4th- Dry Bones
5th- Daisy
6th- King Boo
7th- Shy Guy
Last- Toad

Who will make it back to Coconut Mall first? Tune in Friday!
 
I didn't think I'd see you guys today since we had a party for my birthday; which is this Sunday. But enough about me...

CHAPTER 14 & 3/3! Consider the last two parts the other two thirds.

Bowser: AVALANCHE!
Peach: Not again...
Bowser: -throws Bob-omb and triggers avalanche-
Author's Note: There's a prime example of Nintendo logic right here. On DK Summit in MKWii, throwing Bob-ombs Doesn't trigger an avalanche. Just thought I'd point that out.
Daisy: Oh my gosh! -gets covered in snow-
Bowser: Uh-oh... -gets covered in snow-
Torque: Great... everyone's getting buried in the avalanche. Should we send in a rescue team to recover their... oh wait. I'm getting word that they're ok and the snow is traveling down toward the Mall.

At said mall...
Torque: There you guys are! Wait a minute, where's Toad and Dry Bones?
Toad: Right here!
Torque: You two are slow as ever. I should throw you both out, but since there's no way to tell who came in first, we'll just keep you all in the game, for at least one more episode. See you next time!

Hey I'm the one who says that! Oh well. This chapter's gone on long enough anyway. See you next time for Chapter 15!
 
Sad to say, this story ends now. In traditional Mario Kart Style! I'll be making The 15th and final chapter and introduction to the next story I write into 4 parts, and update it throughout the week, that's the plan anyway. I hope you had fun reading this!
                                                                                                                                                                              Billy12510/General Guy
 
FINALE Pt. 1!
Torque: GAther round! The final challenge starts now!
Bowser: Already?
Torque: Yep! I'll expain how the finale works. You're be going through the ultimate challenge, something beyond anthing you had to deal with this season! It is called: THE RAINBOW GAUNTLET!
Daisy: The Rainbow Gauntlet?
Torque: No. THE RAINBOW GAUNTLET! You'll be racing thorugh the Rainbow Roads of the N64 era, the GBA era, the NGC era, and the Wii era. After each race the bottom two racers get cut off. On the final race, the first to cross the finish line will win $250000! So, you ready?
King Boo: As I'll ever be.
At N64's Rainbow Road course.
Peach: Let's get this over with.
Torque: GO!
Bowser takes the lead, followed by Peach and Daisy.
Toad: Why won't my car start?
DB: I won't tell...
Toad: Cheater! -beings Flintstoning the car-
King Boo: You'll never win like that!
Toad: Oh yah? Take this! -uses Bullet Bill-
Dry Bones and King Boo fall over edge.
Luigi: Here we gooooooooooooooo!
Shy Guy: OMG! I'm gonna fall! -corrects self- phew!
2 laps later
Toad's Bullet Bill before finish line.
Toad: No no NO! Don't do this to me!
1st race standings
1st-Bowser
2nd-Daisy
3rd-Peach
4th-Shy Guy
5th-King Boo
6th-Dry Bones
7th-Luigi
Dead Last-Toad
Toad: NO! I lost!
Torque: Yeah. But so did Luigi. So both of you leave.

Later before the second race starts...
Bowser: You two know what to do right?
King Boo: Yeah, Toad was just a test.
DB: Once the show is over...
King Boo: The plan springs into action.
Bowser: Mario... this time you won't defeat me!


Ooh... looks like Bowser's up to something here huh? Well you won't know what I have planned until next story. Next time on Super Circuit Finale, the second quarter of THE RAINBOW GAUNTLET!
 
8socc3r said:
Mario wasn't in this race.
You must enjoy pointing out mistakes I make, but this last statement ties into my next story my friend.
Finale Part 2!

Torque: Everyone ready?
Bowser: Yeah yeah yeah can we get this over with?
Daisy: What's with the urgency?
DB: King Bowser is an impatient man.
Peach: Boy is he!
Peach and Daisy laugh.
Shy Guy: -laughing- t-t-that was a good one!
Bowser: Laugh at this! -throws Bob-omb-
Shy Guy: Huh? -gets tossed over the edge by explosion-
Torque: GO!
Daisy: What?
King Boo: See ya slow poke!
Daisy: No you don't!
Halfway through the course, btw: We're on GBA Rainbow Road if you didn't read the last part.
DB: You guys are too slow for my kind!
Bowser: Don't forget who paid for your driving school lessons moron!
King Boo: Calm down King Bowser sir. We've got everything under control.
Bowser: No you don't! As long as Daisy's still in here she can screw everything up for me!
DB: You want her gone, we'll get it done!
King Boo: Let's go.
Bowser: -laughs evilly-
Peach: How we doing?
Daisy: 4th and 5th.
Peach: Torque'll probably kick out Shy Guy since he's no where to be found.
Daisy: You think Bowser's up to something?
Peach: Whatever it is it has something to do with me no doubt.
Daisy: Think Dry Bones is in on it?
Peach: King Boo too.
Author's Note: Wow someone actually reads this! Oh wait I made that joke already.
Daisy: Ask them yourselves, here they come!
King Boo: Hey eat this! -throws Green Shell at Daisy-
Dry Bones uses a Mushroom and tries hitting Daisy.
Daisy: Woah -dodges both- Why are the both after me?
Peach: Who cares? Let's ditch these two!
Both uses Bullet Bills to KO both of them.
At the finish line...
Bowser: What?!
Torque: I'll go over as many times as you want, here's the standings.
1st-Bowser
2nd-Peach
3rd-Daisy
4th- ?
Torque: King Boo and Dry Bones were KO'd at such a close time its almost impossible to tell who was first to fall. So looks like it'll just be the three of you going into NGC Rainbow Road.

Which will be gotten into either tomorrow or Wednesday.
 
Chapter 15 Pt. 3!
Torque: Welcome to NGC Rainbow Road!
Bowser: This one was supposed to be easy...
Torque: What was that?
Bowser: Nothing.
Torque: Well first two to cross the finish line move on.
Peach: :(
Daisy: Hang in there. As long as we both finish ahead of Bowser, we at least win and stop his plan.
Peach: Which we still have no idea what it is.
Author's Note: So much for someone actually reading this.
Torque: GO!
Bowser: See ya! -uses Golden Mushroom-
Peach: How do we catch up?
Daisy: -notices falling star- Make a Wish?
Peach: Alright. -wishing-
At the 2nd Lap.
Bowser: How'd you two get in front of me?
Peach: We wished for it.
Bowser: Wish past this! -transofrms into Bullet Bill and knocks out Daisy-
Peach: Daisy!
Torque: Look's like she's out of the race! Bower and Peach are going to battle on Wii Rainbow Road for the ultimate prize.

I know this was short, but all of chapter 15 is going to be added together to form the entire Chate 15. Only the last race and the Epilouge for this story. I'm sorry it ended so soon, but it started to get uninteresting to me, so I decided to end it fast as I can.
 
FINALE Pt. 1!
Torque: GAther round! The final challenge starts now!
Bowser: Already?
Torque: Yep! I'll expain how the finale works. You're be going through the ultimate challenge, something beyond anthing you had to deal with this season! It is called: THE RAINBOW GAUNTLET!
Daisy: The Rainbow Gauntlet?
Torque: No. THE RAINBOW GAUNTLET! You'll be racing thorugh the Rainbow Roads of the N64 era, the GBA era, the NGC era, and the Wii era. After each race the bottom two racers get cut off. On the final race, the first to cross the finish line will win $250000! So, you ready?
King Boo: As I'll ever be.
At N64's Rainbow Road course.
Peach: Let's get this over with.
Torque: GO!
Bowser takes the lead, followed by Peach and Daisy.
Toad: Why won't my car start?
DB: I won't tell...
Toad: Cheater! -beings Flintstoning the car-
King Boo: You'll never win like that!
Toad: Oh yah? Take this! -uses Bullet Bill-
Dry Bones and King Boo fall over edge.
Luigi: Here we gooooooooooooooo!
Shy Guy: OMG! I'm gonna fall! -corrects self- phew!
2 laps later
Toad's Bullet Bill before finish line.
Toad: No no NO! Don't do this to me!
1st race standings
1st-Bowser
2nd-Daisy
3rd-Peach
4th-Shy Guy
5th-King Boo
6th-Dry Bones
7th-Luigi
Dead Last-Toad
Toad: NO! I lost!
Torque: Yeah. But so did Luigi. So both of you leave.

Later before the second race starts...
Bowser: You two know what to do right?
King Boo: Yeah, Toad was just a test.
DB: Once the show is over...
King Boo: The plan springs into action.
Bowser: Mario... this time you won't defeat me!


Finale Part 2!

Torque: Everyone ready?
Bowser: Yeah yeah yeah can we get this over with?
Daisy: What's with the urgency?
DB: King Bowser is an impatient man.
Peach: Boy is he!
Peach and Daisy laugh.
Shy Guy: -laughing- t-t-that was a good one!
Bowser: Laugh at this! -throws Bob-omb-
Shy Guy: Huh? -gets tossed over the edge by explosion-
Torque: GO!
Daisy: What?
King Boo: See ya slow poke!
Daisy: No you don't!
Halfway through the course, btw: We're on GBA Rainbow Road if you didn't read the last part.
DB: You guys are too slow for my kind!
Bowser: Don't forget who paid for your driving school lessons moron!
King Boo: Calm down King Bowser sir. We've got everything under control.
Bowser: No you don't! As long as Daisy's still in here she can screw everything up for me!
DB: You want her gone, we'll get it done!
King Boo: Let's go.
Bowser: -laughs evilly-
Peach: How we doing?
Daisy: 4th and 5th.
Peach: Torque'll probably kick out Shy Guy since he's no where to be found.
Daisy: You think Bowser's up to something?
Peach: Whatever it is it has something to do with me no doubt.
Daisy: Think Dry Bones is in on it?
Peach: King Boo too.
Author's Note: Wow someone actually reads this! Oh wait I made that joke already.
Daisy: Ask them yourselves, here they come!
King Boo: Hey eat this! -throws Green Shell at Daisy-
Dry Bones uses a Mushroom and tries hitting Daisy.
Daisy: Woah -dodges both- Why are the both after me?
Peach: Who cares? Let's ditch these two!
Both uses Bullet Bills to KO both of them.
At the finish line...
Bowser: What?!
Torque: I'll go over as many times as you want, here's the standings.
1st-Bowser
2nd-Peach
3rd-Daisy
4th- ?
Torque: King Boo and Dry Bones were KO'd at such a close time its almost impossible to tell who was first to fall. So looks like it'll just be the three of you going into NGC Rainbow Road.

Chapter 15 Pt. 3!
Torque: Welcome to NGC Rainbow Road!
Bowser: This one was supposed to be easy...
Torque: What was that?
Bowser: Nothing.
Torque: Well first two to cross the finish line move on.
Peach: :(
Daisy: Hang in there. As long as we both finish ahead of Bowser, we at least win and stop his plan.
Peach: Which we still have no idea what it is.
Author's Note: So much for someone actually reading this.
Torque: GO!
Bowser: See ya! -uses Golden Mushroom-
Peach: How do we catch up?
Daisy: -notices falling star- Make a Wish?
Peach: Alright. -wishing-
At the 2nd Lap.
Bowser: How'd you two get in front of me?
Peach: We wished for it.
Bowser: Wish past this! -transofrms into Bullet Bill and knocks out Daisy-
Peach: Daisy!
Torque: Look's like she's out of the race! Bowser and Peach are going to battle on Wii Rainbow Road for the ultimate prize.

And now... the moment you've all been waiting for!
THE FINAL EPISODE!!!
Peach: -gulp-
Bowser: heh heh heh
Torque: Good luck to both of you! The winner of this race is $250,000 richer!
Bowser: I don't need luck.
Torque: GO!
PEach and Bowser both take off to the course.
Bowser: Get her!
Peach: Who are you talking to?
?: Us!
Peach: Dry Bones and King Boo?
King Boo: Your ours now!
Peach: -drops banana peel-
Dry Bones: Wah! -spins out and falls off edge-
Author's Note: I think that's the first time I said Dry Bones in character dialouge in any story I've written.
Bowser takes lead.
Peach: Arrgh! I've gotta catch up.
King Boo: You aren't going anywhere except Bowser's Dungeon!
Peach: WAH!
At the starting line/finish line...
Torque: Where'd Peach go?
Bowser: Guess the pressure got too much for her.
Torque: Or you cheated! Where did she go?
Bowser: I'm not telling! Give me the prize or I'll crush you like the bug you are!
Torque: -gulp- Fine. The Season 1 Super Circuit Champion is... BOWSER!
Bowser: Bwahahahahaha! I've got the cash and the Princess! Nothing can stop me now!

Oh no What will happen to Peach! Find out in the next story! I just have the epilouge to do now.
 
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