My MPL Story

Mother4Eternity

Mother4Eternity

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Ok so most of the forum people might not know but I actually made a story on MPL and Nintendo. I decided to finally show it off in my blog by posting one chapter per day....again this is just my idea of how Nintendo and us Would work out in a full length story series so...please don't be that negative  :-[ please



Chapter 1: The Beginning of a New

Long ago in a land like no other, when legends were just a dream, in ones imagination and no one could defend the weak. Many legends such as that were born and created for such that purpose, many were wise, noble, and kind but all that changed with the birth of a star. A planet in need of protection and help, where crime went everywhere and so did murder. No one could truly help. Then 2015...that all was about to change

March 6 2015, 6:00 AM
Boy: (yawn) ok..time to start off another day, fresh
Boy's mother: have a good day at school sweetie, mommy loves you
Boy: yeah I know (walking to school seeing a shadowing figure)
Boy: huh? What's that? (It disappears) o..k..
Meanwhile at school
Vipsoccermaster: oh hello, sir. You must be one of the new students this year, what's your name?
Everyday Luma: Everyday Luma
Vipsoccermaster: oh!? David? That's a nice name. Well I'm sure you'll fit right in.
Everyday Luma: uhh okay? But my name is Everyday Luma
Vipsoccermaster: ok, David. this is your new class, try and make friends and study ok?
Everyday Luma: sure..?
After school, 3:15 PM
Everyday Luma: man doesn't anyone in this place know my real name? That sure is weird. Oh well, no one knew it anyway
(All of the sudden, a charm drops from the sky.....Luma picks it up)
Everyday luma: hm this sure is a weird... (FWOSH, a blast from the charm fills New York)
Everyday Luma: what the heck?! And this day just keeps getting weird.
Vipsoccermaster in the distance: ok it worked...he is the one

March 7 2015, 6:45 AM
Everyday Luma: this sure is a weird charm, I wonder if someone lost it (bumps into someone)
ImpaDude: hey watch it kid!.....*gasp* wait where did you get that???
Everyday Luma: what? This thing? It's kinda cool isn't it? I just found it and..
ImpaDude: quiet, your gonna come with me and tell me everything you know
Everyday Luma: uhh what do you mean? What's going here, and who are you??
ImpaDude: do not play dumb, I hate liars. Tell me what you know or else (clenches fists)
Everyday luma: Uhhh I don't have a clue what your talking about, I'm just an average, everyday school kid who should be there instead of dealing with this crazy NUT!
ImpaDude: ..........well I guess you don't really know anything...anyways nice to meet you, I'm ImpaDude.
Everyday Luma: I'm Everyday Luma.....wait you have one of those names too? And you can hear my actual name?
ImpaDude: God do I have to explain everything to you. the names people hear instead are our cover names to keep us safe.
Everyday Luma: wait, us? Cover names? Who Are we hiding from? I don't get anything your saying, I'm gonna call the cops, you're freaking me out.
ImpaDude: no don't! (Takes his phone)
Everyday luma: hey! Give that back!
ImpaDude: just hear me out. Everyday Luma, that charm you "found" serves as a gateway to a different world.
Everyday Luma:.......... I don't believe you -_-
ImpaDude: Just hear the rest, we (the people with special names) actually come from that world but were sent here for a different purpose. To keep this place safe from evil, and since you pickup that charm and it reacted to you. Then you must be the one who will save us all.
Everyday luma: wow, that is so not true. I don't get it at all, it doesn't make any sense
??: I wouldn't say it's non believable at all
Everyday luma and impadude: huh??
ImpaDude: oh no! Him! Everyday..I mean David...all will be explained in do time but right now, you have to keep that charm safe, don't give it to anyone, don't lose it or anything. Keep it protected. we gotta go but I'll see you later.
Everyday Luma: hey wait!.... Who was that voice and why did it scare him off..hmm
March 7 2015, 10:35 AM
Everyday luma: (sneaks back home)
Luma's mom: Oh David? your home early!?
Everyday luma: uhh yeah, it was a half day today..because of...a break in..
Luma's mom: a break in!?!? Agh did you get hurt, are their any bumps or bruises!? And where did you get this weird gem from
Everyday Luma: no I'm fine and this thing? It's just a gift from a friend..


 
Try not to write in script form. I made this mistake when I was younger because it seems easier and more straightforward, but really that's not the way you want to write fiction.

Just take this first piece of dialogue for example:

March 6 2015, 6:00 AM
Boy: (yawn) ok..time to start off another day, fresh
Boy's mother: have a good day at school sweetie, mommy loves you

Instead of just saying it's 6 am in March, try and describe that. Illustrate the scenario so that the reader can visualize the setting. Then lead it in to the protagonist waking up.

Here's a better way of how to write that first line: "Ok," the boy yawned. "Time to start off another day, fresh." All I did was change the formatting so it reads like a narrative rather than a screenplay. Instead of having the actions in parenthesis, turn them into sentences and build upon them. Is the boy just standing in his house, decides to yawn while speaking his first line? Again, illustrate the scenario and describe what the boy is doing. For example, if the boy was in bed, and this is the first thing he says when waking up, you could write the first line like this: "Ok," the boy yawned, crawling out of bed. "Time to start off another day, fresh."

The way I'm reading this, there is a passage of time between the first and second lines. Fill the gaps between your dialogue. What is the boy doing between the first line and the second line? If he's getting ready for school, make sure you point that out so the reader knows that time is passing. Even just a sentence or two, so that it flows into the dialogue of his mother telling him to have a good day.

Try and re-write at least the first part in narrative form. Remember: picture what's happening your mind.
 
MattC said:
Try not to write in script form. I made this mistake when I was younger because it seems easier and more straightforward, but really that's not the way you want to write fiction.

Just take this first piece of dialogue for example:

March 6 2015, 6:00 AM
Boy: (yawn) ok..time to start off another day, fresh
Boy's mother: have a good day at school sweetie, mommy loves you

Instead of just saying it's 6 am in March, try and describe that. Illustrate the scenario so that the reader can visualize the setting. Then lead it in to the protagonist waking up.

Here's a better way of how to write that first line: "Ok," the boy yawned. "Time to start off another day, fresh." All I did was change the formatting so it reads like a narrative rather than a screenplay. Instead of having the actions in parenthesis, turn them into sentences and build upon them. Is the boy just standing in his house, decides to yawn while speaking his first line? Again, illustrate the scenario and describe what the boy is doing. For example, if the boy was in bed, and this is the first thing he says when waking up, you could write the first line like this: "Ok," the boy yawned, crawling out of bed. "Time to start off another day, fresh."

The way I'm reading this, there is a passage of time between the first and second lines. Fill the gaps between your dialogue. What is the boy doing between the first line and the second line? If he's getting ready for school, make sure you point that out so the reader knows that time is passing. Even just a sentence or two, so that it flows into the dialogue of his mother telling him to have a good day.

Try and re-write at least the first part in narrative form. Remember: picture what's happening your mind.
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Eh that way was never my thing when I first made. I thought this was pretty good :/
 
Chapter 2: Long crossroads ahead

In the other world
March 9 2015, 7:30 AM. Bowser's castle
Bowser: ha ha ha!!! I finally managed to capture princess peach yet again. And this time I have a way where mario won't save you this time!
Peach: yeah yeah we've been through this before bowser, you kidnap me, Mario kicks your ass again, it's just gotten really old now, let it go
Bowser: geez when did you turn into a bitch
Peach: after that little pic of me for mario party 10
Bowser:....that looked hot though
peach: ehhh why do you always kidnap me?
Bowser: oh because I need a queen to rule over the land with and your the nearest one
Peach: can't you just get daisy for once?
Bowser: ehhh no
suddenly earthquakes are heard all over the land.
Bowser: whoa! What the heck was that!? That was huge!!
Peach: uhh bowser? Look outside
Bowser: I never saw that place before, green, mid-evil, and filled with darkness
Peach: sounds like Hyrule
Bowser: I don't get it, why is Hyrule merging with the mushroom kingdom? Doesn't that only happen during smash bros?
Peach: (hmmm unless....) hey bowser, do you mind if me and you take a vacation away from here and to dream land? <3
Bowser: anything for you princess :$
Peach: (great, this might be our only hope, Mario I hope you catch up)

Meanwhile back on Earth
March 9 2015, 8:42 AM

Everyday Luma glancing at the charm while walking: ok it's been 2 days since that kid told me that stuff and I still don't understand it. But I haven't took it off after that....
???: do you always talk to yourself?
Everyday Luma: who are...oh a girl?
Rosie: this "girl" has a name, it's Rosie
Everyday Luma: my name is Everyday Luma, nice to meet you.
Rosie: oh!?....well it's nice to meet you too Luma
Everyday luma: oh wow! You know my real name (hmm interesting)
Rosie: yeah why wouldn't I be? :p
Everyday luma: well it's just that...
Impadude: ROSIE!!!
Rosie & luma: ? Impadude?...
Impadude: I've been looking for ya and hi again Luma. Great, you didn't give the charm to anyone and it makes a good necklace for Ya XP
Everyday Luma: yeah.... Wait, Rosie? You know him?
Rosie: of course I do, he's my boyfriend
Impadude: yeah
Luma: oh!....ok...
Impadude: anyways luma, before the villains figure out their realms are merging together in the other worlds, we have to be prepared for any attacks (it's only a matter of time until they come here)
Luma: whoa whoa whoa slow down! Villains? Realms merging? Again with more crazy stuff
Impadude: listen luma, something's coming soon and we need to be ready. You haven't even unlocked your powers yet :/
Luma: powers? What powers?
Impadude: look we gotta go but I'll tell Ya who you need to see next, it's someone who needs cheering up.
Rosie: come on Impa, let's go get some mocha frappé's and good luck luma
Luma: I still don't know what's going on, (sigh) why did I have to find this thing
Meanwhile at Luma's school 12:56 PM
Luma: ok I looked all over this place and I haven't seen anyone who.. (Luma sees a short boy about to collapse)
Luma: I should've complained hours ago then |:T...hey are you okay? You don't look so good
???: AGH KEEP AWAY FROM ME..ugh *huff*
Luma: calm down....your bleeding on your arm
???: It-it's nothing agh...I gotta go..
Luma: kid I can help you if you want, let me take you to the nurse
???: n-no...AGH.... Leave me alone (a force pushes luma and the boy runs away)
Luma: ouch, did he just.....nah....did he? Hmm poor kid
??? At his house: *huff* *huff* *huff* ..... (Cuts himself) I just want this to be over ;_;

Meanwhile back in the other world

link: (great spin) HEYAHHHHH!!!! Heh alright, that's more monsters beaten. Wait a minute...Pokemon? In Faron Woods? I'm confused?
Mario: you should be
Link: MARIO!? what are you doing here!?!?
Mario: I was just on my way to bowser's castle, when all of the sudden this place showed up. Is this a bonus world?
Link: something weird is going on here. Let's look around and find out.
???: that won't be necessary
Mario & link: ??? Who are you?
Minkey: I am minkey, your worst nightmare!
Link: careful mario, this guy looks like trouble
Minkey: indeed I am
Mario: what do you want? Are you here to stop us or something!?
Minkey: why don't you come here and find out
Mario: with pleasure (Mario jumps right at minkey and keeps punching, link joins in too but Minkey seems unphased. Minkey knocks them back with a field and fires a blast at them)
Mario & link: UGH, OUCH
Link: *huff* this guy's tough
Minkey: heh heh, in your current states your no match for me
Mario: oh yeah!? (Mario jumps at Minkey again but is knocked back immediately)
Minkey: see
Mario: ugh...what do you want then
Minkey: me? Oh I don't want anything of use....however, with the whole realms joining fiasco, I want to person who started it.
Mario: well it wasn't me or Link so too bad
Minkey: oh please, like I'm not aware of that. The person is on an entirely different world from us
Mario:...... Oh no (the time is coming)
Minkey: yes Mario, it is and I need to eradicate all of those special children on earth before they become a threat to my plans.....say where's the other one?
Link: right here (fires a light arrow directly at Minkey)
Minkey: AGH YOU LITTLE..
Link: come on Mario, there's no telling how long he'll be stunned, we need to figured out a way to get to this "Earth" and help those children out
Mario: yeah that's easier said than done but how do we get there?
Link: i think I know a goddess and angel who can help with that.
 
WiiUFan-04 said:
This isn't bad at all, but some parts are abit uninteresting.
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This is only the beginning ;) Wait some more chapters



Anyway i'm so happy i can read this on the Forum (BTW i was the one that evaluated each chapter before M4E started sharing it with other MPLers by Email :p You can thank me for making (a little :p) this project go forward)
BEST FANFIC EVER (Actually the only one i care about)
 
Chapter 3: to the skyworld!!

The other world
March 10 2015, 10:39 AM
Mario: okay you think we got away from him?
Link: hard to say but we did run pretty far
Mario: man that guy is just so powerful, how are we gonna beat him?
Link: well we'll worry about that later, right now we have to get to skyworld
Mario: skyworld? The person we need is there?
Link: yes. She's a goddess known as lady Palutena. She lives up to her title but even though she is a god, she seems to have quite the sense of humor
Mario: I see....'_' wait, we have to climb those mountains to get there?
Link: yup. Come on it's not that hard
Mario: easy for you to say. You don't have the body of a meatball T_T
Link: I ain't carrying you if that's what you want, you'll just have to try
Mario: fine...HEY YOU CHEATER, STOP USING THAT CLAWSHOT!

Meanwhile back on Earth
March 10 2015, 11:30 AM

Vipsoccermaster: hey luma, can you come here?
Luma: uhh a private talk with the principal is never good
Vipsoccermaster: relax I just wanted to tell Ya that your a very special person and that you need to remember to guard that charm with your life
Luma: ......aren't you a little old to believe in fairytales?
Vipsoccermaster: I'll try to ignore that
Luma: listen you and everyone else around me keeps telling me that I need to protect this thing but I really don't have to, all this bad guy, magic, and other world talk is all in your heads, it's not real
Vipsoccermaster: hmm I see. Hey come with me really quick
Luma: where are we going?
Vipsoccermaster: we're going to work on your powers, you need to protect yourself if something comes after you
Luma: I DONT HAVE POWERS!!!
Vipsoccermaster: not with that attitude. It seems as though the reason why your powers are blocked is because of your negative emotions towards this and not believing the situation when we tell you straight up, so we're going to show you what you can do.
Luma: (sigh) I keep telling you I can't DO ANYTHING!!
Vipsoccermaster: calm down we're here. Now you see those targets over there? I want you to hit them with an energy blast
Luma: ener what???
Vipsoccermaster: just concentrate. Focus your mind into your hand and then release it.
Luma: (sigh) fine.....but this'll show you that it's not real and I can't do anything........................................................ There see, nothing happened
Vipsoccermaster: take a look around you
(Everything is destroyed in the park)
Luma: whoa....did I do....nah. There was probably an earthquake and your talking blocked out the noise for me.
Vipsoccermaster: I wasn't talking
Luma:.....sure you weren't
Vipsoccermaster: listen you gotta keep practicing this and get it under control because you hit me too -_-
Luma: I didn't do that...you probably did that to yourself....look I gotta get to class, thanks for trashing the park
Vipsoccermaster: (sigh) he's a difficult one alright but we're getting there
(A can knocks over)
???: *gasp*
Vipsoccermaster: hmm? Hey I've seen you around the school before....are you ok?
???: I'm fine.....I..I saw that.....he's really good......
Vipsoccermaster: oh I see your one of us, what's your name kid?
???:.....my name is.....uh (collapses)
Luma: hey I think I dropped my books during...that...?
Vipsoccermaster: kid?....kid?!....(hears heartbeat) it's beating really slowly.....he's gonna die Luma, you have to heal him, use your powers quick!
Luma: wha-what!? C-can't we take him to the nearest hospital...
Vipsoccermaster: luma this is serious, I'm not playing around anymore, you HAVE to heal him, there's no time!? Listen to me, you have to know when people are actually telling the truth and open your eyes and ears because this is real life, this is happening and YOU have the powers to heal him!
Luma:.........ok....what do I have to do?
Vipsoccermaster: place your hands around his heart and focus your energy. You can do it!
(luma closes his eyes and hopes to save the dying boy.....suddenly, Rays of light started to emit from Luma's hands)
Vipsoccermaster: he's...doing it
(Luma opened his eyes and saw what he was doing, he finally believed)
Luma: I....is this really happening?...
Vipsoccermaster: yes it is
???: *GASP!!* *cough* *cough*
Vipsoccermaster: !!! He's breathing again, quick let's get him to the hospital now.

Meanwhile in the other world
March 10 2015, 6:43 PM

Mario: *huff* *huff* my god that took forever to climb, I think I'm gonna take a break from rock climbing...forever
Link: oh relax, we're already at the top anyway and there's the clouds to skyworld
Mario: well what are we waiting for, let's go!
Minkey in the distance: hmmm if they see that goddess, she might come up with a way to earth....hehehehe
In dreamland-
Bowser: ok peach, why did you wanna come to dreamland?
Peach in a cage: oh no reason, but can we stop and look at the fountain of dreams...up close
Bowser: oh ok..hey wait a minute I know what your trying to do
Peach: *gulp*
Bowser: you wanna....go sight-seeing and take some romantic pics with the star rod, oh what a perfect honeymoon trip
Peach: honeymoon?....uh I mean yes, that's exactly it
Minkey: better cancel that date bowser
Bowser: HUH? Who are you?
Minkey: I'm Minkey and I'm here because I know we have a common enemy, Mario!
Bowser: hmm I'm listening
Minkey: I hear Mario is heading to skyworld to try and look for a way to Earth. Ya know if you were at earth you could probably expand your koopa army and dominate every living thing.
Bowser: hmm yes... YES THATS PERFECT! change of plans peach, we're going to skyworld right away. Calling all koopa's, goomba's, hammer bros, and anyone else to attack skyworld right now.
Peach: oh no, Mario :(
Minkey: hehe perfect, what a sucker
Kirby in the distance:......poyo?

Meanwhile at Earth again
March 10 2015, 7:20 PM. Hospital

Vipsoccermaster: how is he nurse?
Nurse: he's fine, we just found out that he lost A LOT of blood, it seems as though he's been cutting himself in different areas of his body, he's lucky to be alive with only that much blood.
Vip & luma: uh yeah it's (crazy right) such a miracle (I don't know how that's possible)
Vip & luma: (having big grins)
Nurse: uhh well ok, he's awake now if you wanna talk to him
Vipsoccermaster: thanks
Luma: hello
???: h-huh? Where am I....agh, this hurts.
Luma: just relax, your gonna be okay now
???: you were the one who helped me, th-thank you, you saved my life
Luma: aw it was nothing, I'm Everyday Luma by the way. What's your name
Mother4Ever: I'm Mother4Ever...
 
Chapter 4: Answers & War

March 10 2015, 8:15 PM. Hospital

Luma: well it's nice that M4E is feeling better, as for you
Vipsoccermaster: hmm?
Luma: ok ok I believe you guys now but why was it that you guys knew what was going on and I couldn't? Why do I have this colorful charm? AND WHY DO I HAVE MAGIC POWERS!?
Vipsoccermaster: all will be revealed soon Luma
Luma: NO, no more bullshit, your gonna tell me what's going on right now!
Vipsoccermaster: (sigh) why not I guess. Get comfortable.
Luma: oh I got all night
Vipsoccermaster: ok where do I start, how about the very beginning. You see, how all of us have powers is because we're not from this world, we're from another land that is full of darkness and evil monsters. You see, a bad guy by the name of Minkey seems to take a liking to all these special children and sees us a threat to his main plan in the future. He would've killed us as babies but if it wasn't for the protection of such heroes we escape but....except one.....anyways, we got away but to make sure he wouldn't find us, we were sent to a different planet and undergoing real world names that other people can hear. It was a magic spell on us that also numbed our powers. However a mystical and powerful item known as the UniverseKey. It accepted your heart and made everything go into a new when your grabbed it. The realms in Nintendomain are starting to join together (for good) and we're starting to get our powers back. As we speak different things from Nintendomain might be seeping through to Earth and maybe even people. We have to make sure anything from the land is also unseen or the humans would try to do crazy things to us and would try to go to our land. Now do you see what's happening
Luma: O_O whoa, that's all so crazy...wait if we aren't humans than what are we?
Vipsoccermaster: we are known as Mii's
Luma: Mii's? That's a stupid name
Vipsoccermaster: we look like people but we actually have powers in disguise.
Luma you are the chosen one able to stop Minkey with your powers, their strong enough
Luma: whoa, Ya know this actually sounds pretty cool...what kind of powers do I have?
Vipsoccermaster: I'm...not quite sure yet
Mother4Ever: hey guys...I'm feeling better now, although this cast hurts a bit
Luma: at least your walking, so why do you cut yourself?
Mother4Ever: uhh I don't wanna talk about it :/
Vipsoccermaster: M4E relax, we just wanna help you
Mother4Ever: well...to be honest...I'm just a little sad about..something that happened to me
Luma: a little? Ouch! (Vip hit luma)
Vipsoccermaster: hmmm you seem to have a lot of darkness in you
Luma: how do you know?....Ohhhh that's your power
Vipsoccermaster: yes, M4E seems to be very corrupted by sadness and darkness, that can make you do crazy things if it's bottled up.
Mother4Ever: Wha-WHAT!? WELL GET IT OUT OF ME D:
Vipsoccermaster: it's not that simple really, we'd actually have to go inside your mind and take it out but we don't have anything to do it
Luma:.......maybe I could do it?
Mother4Ever: YES! PLEASE HELP ME :(
Vipsoccermaster: uhhh it's worth a shot luma, okay try placing your hand over M4E's head, then focus your inner energy to his
Luma: uhh I'm just gonna force it, HAAAAAAAAAAA (vip grabs Luma's hand)
Vipsoccermaster: unless you wanna blow his head off I suggest listening to me
Mother4Ever: y-yeah luma, listen to vip, he seems to know what he's doing ._.
Luma: fine okay (closes his eyes then concentrates) .........................did it work?
Vipsoccermaster: open your eyes and find out
Luma: hmm? Ohh....a portal...well do we have to jump in it?
Vipsoccermaster: only if you wanna help this boy, yes we have to jump in
Luma: alright....let's go, I wonder what we'll see in his mind

In the other world
March 11 2015, 8:45 AM

Mario: thanks for letting us rest up here Palutena, it was so exhausting to get here
Link: speak for yourself (Clawshot FTW)
Palutena: heh heh well your welcome, what brings you guys here anyway? If you want a dip in a hot-spring might I suggest...
Link: nah we're good
Mario: we just came here because we thought you would have a way to Earth
Palutena: Earth!? Why would you need to go there
Link: long story but we need to get there right away
Palutena: well.....let me check.......
Link & Mario: okay
Pit: LADY PALUTENA!!!!!!?!?!? AHHH DIDNT YOU REMEMBER THAT IM FLY OOF (pit crashed to skyworld)
Mario & Link:.........
Pit: uhhh link? Why are you...never mind I'll figure out later but right now an entire army of Turtle looking, Hammer throwing guys are on their way here!
Mario: wait did you say turtle hammer throwing guys? Uh oh
Link: that sounds like Bowser's army, but why are they here?
Mario: maybe they know we were trying to go to Earth
Pit: Earth? I've been there lots of times
Mario & Link: HOW!? PALUTENA IS TAKING FOREVER
Pit: CAAAALM DOWN and through the Door
Mario & Link: the door?
Pit: it's a kid Icarus thing but the door allows me to go anywhere in the known regions
Mario: GREAT well where is it?
Pit: it's down the hall here. I'll take you to it
(Minkey comes right in and kicks pit out the way)
Mario: oh no, you again
Minkey: oh yes, me again! You guys are not going through that door, I am!
Pit: uhh guys, the koopa army is here!
Mario: shot we gotta stop them and make sure Minkey doesn't go through the door, what are we gonna do!?
Palutena: ok I'm back, and I know what we could do. We could go through the door
Everyone: YOUR LATE!
Palutena:.......anyways I heard what's happening so far and here's what we're gonna do. Pit you take the centurions and stop the air fleet, Mario and Link, you'll come with me to the door and stop Minkey
Mario, Link, and Pit: GOT IT!
Palutena: come on guys it's this way
Minkey: great and I'll just follow behind
(Mario uses his hammer this time and Link uses a Triforce slash on Minkey)
Minkey: ugh I'll say you put a scratch on me but now it's my turn
(Minkey pulls off lots of combos on Mario and link but they seem to often get back up and keep attacking)
Mario: *huff* is that all you got
Link: *huff* yeah we could...do this all day
Minkey: heh heh well let's hope you won't survive this
(Minkey creates a giant energy ball then chucks it at them but suddenly Kirby shows up and inhales the whole thing)
Minkey: what the!?
Mario, Link, Palutena: Kirby!?!?
Crash Kirby: poyo poyo :D
Minkey: agh no matter, get ready to die
Palutena: guys the door is over here
Minkey: NOOO if they get to the real world those kids will be unstoppable.
(Minkey knocks them all away from the door and try's to rush into it but then Crash Kirby EXPLODES, making Palutena's temple crumble and Minkey disappear)
Mario: quickly let's go before it gets blocked off
Pit: wait for me, you'll need all the help you can get out there and don't worry lady Palutena, we took care of those creeps outside no problem
Palutena: that's great pit but if your gonna go with them I suggest STOP TALKING AND GO BEFORE ITS BURIED IN RUBBLE
Pit: OHHHH RIGHT!
(Mario, Link, Kirby, and Pit go through the door)

At Earth
March 11 2015, 10:28 AM. over Manhattan

Mario: Huh....HUH? PIT WHY ARE WE FALLING
Pit: oh I forgot to mention the door only goes above the sky
Mario & Link: PIT!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH
Kirby: P-Pit! POYO!!!!!!!
 
Chapter 5: into the mind

March 11 2015, 10:34 AM. M4E's Mind

Luma: WHOAAAA THIS IS WEIRD! How long until we reach his mind
Vipsoccermaster: in about....now
(ZAP, suddenly they land on ground)
Luma: phew, floating like that was weird. Now.....this is M4E's thoughts Huh? I don't see what's so bad about it, it's so colorful and peaceful but why is everything distorted?
Vipsoccermaster on the wall: oh because rules don't apply in one's mind.
Luma: how did you do that?
Vipsoccermaster: like I said (jumps really high) rules don't apply!
Luma: whoa...so.... (Shots flamethrowers from his hands) WHOA how do I stop!
Vipsoccermaster: um I wouldn't, we have company
(A group of dark figures emerges from the ground)
Luma: what are those things?
Vipsoccermaster: they must be protectors of the evil core in M4E's mind. Their trying to keep us from getting it
Luma: well let's get em (shots his fire at them) this is so weird, dangerous, and cool at the same time
Vipsoccermaster: sweet you got them.....wait they aren't effected by it
(The dark figures rush straight to vip and Luma but a Boy jumps in and stops them with multiple combos)
???: phew that takes care of that
Luma: thanks....uh who are you?
Vipsoccermaster:....Ness?
Ness: yes it's me
Vipsoccermaster: I don't get it...how are you here?
Ness: M4E sorta took a liking to me, I was the last thing he saw before he got sent here and he's looked up to me ever since.
Luma: what's a Ness?
Ness: me and I'm always in M4E's mind, I know everywhere around here even his dark core, I could take you there.
Vipsoccermaster: thanks, we appreciate it, too bad your not really here
Ness: yeah tell the real me I say Hi whenever you see him
Luma: this just got confusing

Meanwhile in another part of New York...in the sky

Mario: AHHHHH WHAT DO WE DO, WE'RE GONNA DIE
Link: except Pit, he's flying
Everyone:......
Link: QUICK GRAB THAT ANGEL
Pit: say what? (Everyone gets on pit) HEY I can't...carry all of you....ugh
Mario: oh come on, so we're still gonna die, I'm still too young and had so much to live for
Link: wait I got an idea, everyone try to fall in the water
(Everyone dives head first into the water)
Mario: *GASP* whoa that was close
Link: *gasp* I'll say, hey where's pit?
Pit: up here, Angels don't swim :p
Kirby: poyo poyo
Link: come on guys we gotta get up to land and find the kids.....uhh did anyone know what happened to Minkey before kirby blow the place up
Mario: nope
Pit: nah-uh
Kirby: Poyo :T
Link: well let's just hope he didn't go through the door
???: HEY!!!!!!!! DO YOU GUYS NEED SOME HELP!!!!!!
Mario: Uhhh no sir, we're good /whispers/ PIT STOP FLYING BEFORE HE SEES YOU
Pit: but I don't swim..
Link: -_- (Link uses Clawshot on pit)
???: HEY, are you guys cosplaying or something? What's with the COOL costumes and the...round pink baby?
Kirby: hi :)
RafalRib: HI IM RAFALRIB BTW, THE HYPE KING AT MY SCHOOL!!!
Link: oh thank god it's you, YOU COULDVE TOLD US OVER THERE
(They got back to land)
RafalRib: WELL EXCUUUUUUSE ME PRINCESS! But I didn't expect to see you guys here
Mario: yeah well listen Raf, we're trying to find one of you, there's a boy that activated the UniverseKey and an evil asshole Minkey is after him
RafalRib: HEY WATCH THE LANGUAGE, MY HYPE CHILDREN ARE READING THIS and the key has been activated!? SWEET that means I got my powers back! I can finally blow stuff up again :D
Link: you were always one of the hyper ones
Mario: Uhhh do you know who might have it Raf?
RafalRib: hmm not really, I seen everyone here and no one has a hype power level BUT I never been to that half of the city!
Pit: you mean we gotta go all the way to there? Ugh I wish I had the power of flight again
Mario: well walking will just have to do for now
RafalRib: orrrrr we can take the HYPE BUS!!!!
Everyone: hype bus poyo?
RafalRib: it's my parents, when they throw my birthday parties ^_^
Mario: okay then let's go!
Pit: uhh do you even know how to drive? You are a kid *gulp*
RafalRib: I can TRY TODAY
(Bus starts and hits a lamp post)
RafalRib: uhh heh heh OK I think I got it down now
Link: you think? -_-
(Bus starts again but while driving they hit mailboxes and almost parked cars)

Meanwhile back in M4E's Mind

Luma: Ness are we getting closer yet? I feel like we've been running for hours
Ness: that's strange...it feels like we've been going in circles
Vipsoccermaster: hmm maybe it's the work of his dark mind again, maybe we should all think of a way to get to the core then the path should show up
Ness: it's worth a shot
(Everyone focusing a path to the core)
Luma: ok it isn't working
Vipsoccermaster: luma you weren't focusing
Luma: I thought I was?
Ness: listen think of it like PSI, you need to concentrate to use it.
Luma: that's great but I don't have PSI, I have....something
Ness: what I'm trying to say is let's give it another go.
Luma: (sigh) okay
(Everyone focuses on a path again)
Luma: ok did it work now?
Vipsoccermaster: I think so....that path looks new....and dark....
Ness: we must be on the right track then let's go
Luma: so vip, to pass the time. What happened to that one child that you said didn't get away from Minkey.....did he kill him ._.
Vipsoccermaster: no, a koopa kidnapped him and raised him as his own. I forget the child's name but he's not good now :/
Luma: hmmm okay
Ness: we're here
(Loads of M4E voices heard in the distance)
Mother4Ever: how could you (i trusted you) *soob* (go away) everyone will laugh at you (I..I thought we were friends) I'm all alone
Luma: whoa...so sad
Ness: THERES THE CORE
Luma: it just looks like a golden statue
Ness: it may look like a golden statue but it's actually an evil source that corrupts one's thoughts, it's called a Mani Mani Statue
Luma: Mani Mani whatever, let's destroy it
(Luma jumps right at it and kicks but is protected by a shield)
Luma: heh well I should've known it wouldn't be that easy
Vipsoccermaster: uhh guys, loads of shadow guardians came
Ness: vip, we'll hold them off while Luma breaks the shield on the statue
Luma: wait me? But how do i..
Vipsoccermaster: remember, your power is far greater than ours
Luma: Uhhh ok....hmm how do I do this....
(Vip and Ness try a lot of attacks on the dark enemies but are getting at numbered)
Ness: Luma (punch kick Jab) We're getting out numbered (PK FLASH)
Vipsoccermaster: (jump kick) how are you doing?
Luma: I'm trying to think of something....hmmm (luma tries to blast the statue)
Vipsoccermaster: not good enough luma, try again but stronger...
(Vip and Ness get taken by the creatures)
Ness: Luma....blast the shield....you can do it.....
Vipsoccermaster: luma....focus before....it's too late......
Luma: *gasp* oh no, guys......uhh I'm trying but.....(one grabs Luma's leg) *gasp* hey let me go AHHHH
(It consumes luma and nothing else is heard...)
...............
Suddenly a glowing light emits from the creatures and luma is carried out, the creatures can't touch him. Luma with glowing eyes fires a huge Ray at the Mani Mani Statue and causes the whole place to EXPLODE

Luma: (falls to the ground then wakes up) uhhhh huh? What just happened?
Vipsoccermaster: ugh I don't know....Luma...whatever you did just saved us.
Ness: it worked, the evil in M4E's mind is gone for good, thanks to you 2
Luma: oh it was nothing...I think....anyways now that that's done, what's say we get back home vip
Vipsoccermaster: agreed
Luma: bye Ness, it was nice meeting you...sorta
Ness: yeah but don't worry, you'll see the real me soon, bye bye
(Luma and vip jump back out of the portal and return home)
Luma: (lands back on solid ground) man is it great to see REAL sunlight
Vipsoccermaster: yeah I'll say, well M4E we did it. How do you feel now?
Mother4Ever: I feel......great!
Nurse: that's wonderful David, well let me just get these forms for you to sign and you'll be on your way
Vipsoccermaster: okay
Mother4Ever:.....(sparks come out of M4E's hands and get bigger) uhh UHHH D:
 
Chapter 6: the search but so much more

March 14 2015, 7:45 AM. New York City

RafalRib: OOOOOOK!!! I got good news and bad news guys
Everyone: ZzZzZzZz
RafalRib:.....WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone: AHHHH what!!!!
RafalRib: oh good, you guys are up now
Link: what is it!?
RafalRib: I got good news and bad news
Mario: what's the good news?
RafalRib: I'm glad you wanted the bad news. The bad news is we looked around this part of NYC for 4 days now and no sign of the boy with the UniverseKey
Pit: what's the good news now?
RafalRib: there is no good news :p
Mario:.......
Link:......
Pit:........
Mario: ok....well let's just keep looking, maybe we haven't checked EVERYWHERE yet. Where would an average boy go?
Pit: School! the Zoo! No wait, THE AMUSEMENT PARK!!
RafalRib: hmmm all locations here, we could split up, Mario goes with Pit, Link goes with Kirby, and I'll go alone. We meet back at Central Park
Everyone: okay
Mario:.....wait but shouldn't we wear disguises so that humans (or anyone else we know) won't think we look weird?
RafalRib: OH DUHH, totally forgot about that.....hang on, I got perfect outfits for you guys
(Link is wearing blue jeans, a green hoodie, and some boots. Pit is wearing a sombrero, a white and gold shirt, and sandals. Kirby is in a puppy suit, and Mario is wearing a red shirt, red cap with no M on it, Blue jeans, and boots.)
RafalRib: well!!! What do Ya think?
Link: I feel...weird. How do people walk in these pants?
Pit: why am I wearing this hat? And a blue and black shirt?
RafalRib: look it was all I got guys. Let's search now and ask questions later!

Meanwhile at Luma's house

Luma: mom can we actually go out somewhere today? I'm bored!!!!!!
Luma's mom: okay sweetie, where do you wanna go?
Luma: THAT IS SO UNFAIR, YOU...wait you said okay?
Luma's mom: yeah, I'm bored too. Let's go do something. What do you wanna do?
Luma: hmm well since everyone is busy today I guess it's just me and you, let's go to Coney Island
Luma's mom: Awww I'm so proud of my baby for making some friends and that sounds great!
Luma: just try not to embarrass me like LAST TIME
Luma's mom: that balloon guy got to close
Luma: mom!!!!!
Luma's mom: okay sweetie, I promise
Luma: ok, I'll get dressed.
Minkey in the distance: and I'll keep watch, i could destroy him right now but I wanna see what he's got...hehehe so this is who I'm dealing with again

March 14 2015, 11:34 AM. Coney Island
Luma: WHOA this place is amazing
???: first time at Coney Island?
Luma: yeah and this place looks awesome, I can't wait to ride all these coasters
???: might I recommend the coney comet first, it's THE BEST
Luma: sweet, I'm Everyday Luma btw
KINGZ: KINGZ, nice to meetcha, I'm here with my friend....(stares at the charm Luma is wearing) cool necklace, where did Ya get it?
Luma: oh this? It's just a birthday present someone got me
KINGZ: funny, I don't see jewelry like that before, it's shape is different and the color pattern is almost unreal....like magic
Luma:...yeah I know, OH there's my mom, gotta go (man that was weird)
KINGZ: you have no idea...
GameGuy5: geez it took them like an hour just to make some damn popcorn, the nerve of those...
KINGZ: come on, i know who has the UniverseKey now
GameGuy5: it's about fucking time, let's get him
KINGZ: dude, watch the language, remember the people reading this?
GameGuy5: 1. Haven't we been over this? I say what I like, even if it's you. And 2. How many times are we gonna break the forth wall in this story?
KINGZ: (sigh) I don't know but for now let's keep a close eye on that kid, he has no idea the amount of power he is containing

Meanwhile with the nintendo heroes
Link: wow kirby, you make a good puppy
Kirby: poyo woof
Link: let's keep the poyo's low for now, we're suppose to act normal and it doesn't seem like he's at the Zoo. (Sigh) guess we better call the others, hopefully they know where he is....now what did Raf say about how to use this?
(Kirby takes the phone and calls Mario then gives it back to link)
Link:......uh okay...hello?
-Mario: yeah?
Link: well he's not at the Zoo, any luck at his school?
-Mario: we searched all the known schools in this City but no sign of him....maybe we should've tried this on a weekday..
Link: (face-palm) anyways I wonder how Raf is doing on Coney Island, maybe we should look there with him
-Mario: okay we'll meet you there I guess

At Coney Island again
Luma's mom: David I don't think I can...ride another ride....can we stop..
Luma: no way, this just got fun, WHAT A RUSH
KINGZ: I'll say
Luma: oh hi KI.i mean Olly, you got on there too?
KINGZ: yeah me and Chris was in the kart behind you
GameGuy5: Sup
KINGZ: so anyways luma, about that charm of yours. It looks really cool, do you mind if we trade you something for it?
Luma:...I don't know....this thing is important to me....
KINGZ: come on. I'll give you anything for it, name anything you want
Luma:....Uhhh well I could go for some ice cream
KINGZ: ice cream got it!......................ok I'm back....where did you go...
(Luma running off)
KINGZ: HEY! Come back!
(Luma runs in a lot of different parts of the amusement park but KINGZ and GameGuy5 still chased him)
Luma: *huff* *huff* what do they want from this thing...
Girl: oh nothing really just to sell
Luma: HUH!? You know them
Girl: yeah those two are the biggest creeps in my school, always taking or stealing people's stuff, it's dumb
Luma: yeah. Their trying to steal my necklace for some reason
Girl: that doesn't sound good....it is a pretty necklace though
Luma: yeah I guess it is
Girl: hey. Mind if I give you a little something? <3
Luma: sure what is it?
Girl: (about to lean in to kiss him but..) wait
Luma: huh..?
Girl: sorry bruh but this ain't worth it. Can I just have the charm and I'll keep it safe...please luma :(
Luma: well......ok but only for a look (how did she know my name)
(Luma almost gives the girl the charm)
RafalRib: NOOOOOOOOOOO DONT GIVE HIM THAT
Luma: huh?
Girl: DONT LISTEN TO HIM, HES MY EX, just let me have it luma I'll keep it safe for you
RafalRib: HES LYING (throws a garbage can at her) LOOK OUT
(Girl reveals herself to be KINGZ)
KINGZ: OUCH, you little..
GameGuy5: BITCH!!
(Game guy and Raf get into an intense fight with many combos)
Luma: wait a minute...if she was....I ALMOST KISSED A GUY!!!!!! EWWWW
KINGZ: UGH don't remind me, that wasn't worth it though but now GIVE IT TO ME OR ILL HAVE TO TAKE IT FROM YOU!
Luma: not gonna happen
(Luma and KINGZ fight but KINGZ is Incredible good and defeats luma)
Luma: what the...do you do...karate or something?
KINGZ: it's called Taekwando, now let me just take that
Luma: NO
(KINGZ tries to take the charm from a struggling luma but during the tug-a-war the charm flies straight into the air)
Everyone: NO!!!
(Everyone jumps after it but Minkey comes out of nowhere and grabs it)
Everyone: UGH
Minkey: HAHAHAHAHA sorry it's funny how stupid you guys are XD
Luma: who are you? Your voice sounds familiar
Minkey: I'm the guy you and ImpaDude heard in the beginning, my name is Minkey
Luma: so your the guy everyone was worried who'd come after me
KINGZ: ugh he's got the UniverseKey
GameGuy5: quick let's get him!!!
(Game guy, KINGZ, and Raf all jump and attack Minkey with Everything they've got but sadly their powers weren't enough and they are blasted to the ground)
GameGuy5: ugh so much for that...
Minkey: trust me id loved to stay and kill you guys but I got better plans now that I have this, later haters!
Luma: GRRR your not getting away
(Luma jumps at Minkey when he teleported and their both gone somewhere else)
RafalRib: AGH their gone! We gotta find them before it's too late
King and GG: we?
RafalRib: YES WE!!!! THIS IS YOUR FAULTS SO COME ON! we got a kid and item to save!
(Raf grabs both KINGZ and GameGuy5 and leave)

 
Chapter 7: Frenemies?

March 14 2015, 1:45 AM Streets

KINGZ: will you let go already!
RafalRib: not really, not until you guys agree to help find that kid
GameGuy: and what if we say no? -_-
RafalRib: oh so you guys don't care about his life? (Rolls eyes) and he has the UniverseKey
KINGZ: well those are good reasons but yeah we don't wanna see him die or anything, sure we'll help you save him
GameGuy: we will? Did I miss something?
KINGZ: we will!!! Not just for the charm but for him, we are good people
GameGuy: yeah yeah we are and all that etc crap, but we don't even know where that floating freak took him
RafalRib: well he couldn't have gone far, let's just search the whole City until we find them!
GameGuy: WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOAA! Are you blind or dumb? New York is FREAKING BIG
RafalRib: YEAH I KNOW :D besides it'll be FUNNN and I have help from the Nintendo heroes
KINGZ: how are they here?
RafalRib: I'll explain never! But let's hurry and find those 2 before its too laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa (stares at Rosie and gawking) uh brb
GameGuy & King:........?
Rosie on the phone: yeah and so I was like..
RafalRib: heeey. what's your name? my name is RafalRib but you can call me always :$
Rosie: oh hold on, some guy showed up. Hi, my name is Rosie
RafalRib: Rosie...that's a pretty name
Rosie: aww thanks, aren't you sweet. Listen i gotta go but I'll talk to you later, here's my phone number if you want
RafalRib: thanks Rosie, I'll see you later..or talk to you later..on the hot line...you have hot lines..I MEAN
KINGZ: Raf she's gone
GameGuy: HA Raf has a little crush, cute :p
RafalRib: hey no I don't...I just...CANT A HYPE KING GET A HYPE QUEEN!
GameGuy: whatever Romeo, I'm sure she's very interested in a Nerdy looking, Spaz's
RafalRib: I AM NOT A SPAZ and I couldn't afford contacts :T
GameGuy: relax I'm just joking but let's go find them already!!!!
RafalRib: okay here's the deal, You and KINGZ can search the upper area, Mario and Kirby will search the downtown area, Link and Pit will search the central areas and I'll search China town
KINGZ: why do you get to go to China town?
RafalRib: because I'm Awesome, DUH
GameGuy: I'll rip your head off..
RafalRib: OK LETS MOVE OUT!

Meanwhile in a dark area
(FWOSH)
Minkey: OK, now get off
Luma: ouch! Give that back to me, it's mine! (Luma charges at Minkey but he dodges)
Minkey: "mine?" Yes it is "mine" thanks for noticing
Luma: you won't get away with this.....where am I?
Minkey: your in a dungeon underneath the city, you need to be here because now that I have this thing there is no way your getting it back.
Luma: why do you need that thing anyway? What's so special about it?
Minkey: oh you'll see in do time but for now I have to clear your search party. Are you 2 ready?
??? & ???: Yes
Luma: who are they?...HEY WAIT, LET ME OUT OF HERE!!!

Meanwhile in China Town
March 14 2015, 8:56 PM

RafalRib: man as cool as this place is I couldn't find Luma anywhere!!! UGH this is so not cool
???: yummy
RafalRib: huh? Who's there?
???: me
RafalRib: who is me?
???: can I just be nameless for now and just get to the part where I destroy you
RafalRib: wait what? (Raf gets punched hard!)
RafalRib: UGH. WHAT THE HECK!!
???: HA HA THE LOOK ON YOUR FACE XD
RafalRib: great an annoying one, well 2 can play at that game (Raf and the mysterious guy fight but another guy jumps in and attacks Raf)
RafalRib: ugh 2 against one huh? Well lucky for you 2, IM FULL OF MOTHERFUCKING HYPE!!!!!!!! (Raf's Hype boosters activate, increasing his stats greatly)
RafalRib: LETS DANCE!!!!!!
(Raf and the 2 guys get in an epic long fight and while it looks like Raf has the upper hand, Minkey comes in and blasts a powerful burst of lightning at him and knocking him out)
???: *huff* *huff* well that was intense
???: yummy
???: sushi
Minkey: you 2 are just lucky I showed up, now that's one annoying pest down and only whoever else to go
???: let's go get the rest of the Mii's and worry about Mario and the others later
???: no doubt they'd be tough
Minkey: clobber whoever you don't like, I don't care. I need to get ready to activate the UniverseKey. Finally a world full of Minkey's >:)
???: hey I just got 2 readings coming from that direction
???: well what are we waiting for, LETS KILL THEM

March 14 2015, 10:23 PM. Urban part of NYC
GameGuy: KINGZ I swear to god we've been searching for this brat forever now, can we just leave and forget about the charm?
KINGZ: we won't feel good about ourselves if we just leave them. We should help
GameGuy: UGHHHGGHGHH I BETTER GET SOMETHING WHEN THIS IS OVER
KINGZ: wait
GameGuy: why'd we stop?
KINGZ:.....something doesn't feel right....
LOOK OUT (pushes GG out of the way of an incoming blast)
GameGuy: *cough* *cough* okay..who's the wise guy that thinks they can kill me?
???: oh we don't think, we will!
???: great this one seems strong, the other one seems clever....I don't like these odds
KINGZ: good because we do. Come on GameGuy, let's go get some answers out of them
GameGuy: BY HITTING!?
KINGZ: yes, by hitting
GameGuy: AW YEAH!!!!! I call the one who tried to hit me
(GameGuy and KINGZ attacked the 2 mysterious guys and are doing very well against them)
GameGuy: ha is that all you got? And I didn't even have to use my full super strength. Oh well (GG cracks his knuckles and punched the guy's face RIGHT OFF...but...)
GameGuy: ha I love cracking skulls....wait a minute....a clone!?
???: that's RIGHT! (Electrocutes GG with a lot of voltage and he passes out)
KINGZ: oh no, GameGuy!
???: your pretty good but don't get distracted
(The guy and KINGZ continue to fight but KINGZ is too fast, quick, and a more experienced fighter. He hurries and grabs GG and runs out)
KINGZ: man who the heck are those 2, their relentless together
???: COWARD!! ME NO LIKE
???: LETS GET EM
KINGZ: ugh we gotta call Mario and the others...and your heavier than you look (GG kicks Olly)
(Phone ringing)
-mario: hello? Incase you guys were wondering we still haven't found...
KINGZ: NEVERMIND THAT NOW, me and GameGuy are being chased by Ninja Midgets! HELP!!
-kirby: Hi!!
-Mario: kirby! ok KINGZ just tell us where you guys are going?
KINGZ: I can't really see what street right now because I'm RUNNING FROM MY LIFE!
-Mario: okay okay but what does it look like?
KINGZ: just a bunch of buildings like it always is..AGH (the guy's starting shooting bolts at them but Olly used all his surroundings to run and cover)
KINGZ: *huff* *huff* you still there? I'm getting really tired T_T they ran us off to the docks now, we're trapped
-Mario: hang on we'll try to make it there as soon as possible
KINGZ: ITS TOO LATE!.uh..Uhhh.....(KINGZ ran and jumped right into the water)
???: DANG IT THEY GOT AWAY
???: relax, I'm sure they didn't survived that sense GameGuy's weight must've been too much for KINGZ
???: well that's 3 down, now Mario and the others are left then Minkey can finally complete his plans with no distractions
(The 2 guys notice that KINGZ dropped his phone and pick it up)
-Mario: KINGZ? Hello?? are you still there???!
Mister Sushi: HI this is Mister Sushi
BossBlitz: and I'm BossBlitz
Sushi & BossBlitz: AND WE'RE GONNA DESTROY YOU :D ^_^

Meanwhile in the Future
March 14 20XX

Mega Man: oh boy it sure does feel great not having to fight anymore Robot masters, although knowing Capcom I can see a mega man 11 in like a few years (although this break sure is nice)
Cut man: Mega Man we got company
Mega Man: well that lasted for a good 7 seconds. I'll be there
Cut man: someone or something showed up here...it just... POOF. What are they?
Mega Man:......Sonic? Tails? WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING BACK HERE??? oh no, IS IT ANOTHER GENESIS WAVE
Sonic: ughhhhh huh? Where are we?...are we in the special stage?
Mega Man: noooo, SONIC!? ITS ME
Sonic:....sorry you are?
Mega Man: UGH YOUVE GOT TO BE KIDDING. We saw each other before. The Genesis wave...Smash 4....the upcoming Worlds unite comic
Sonic:....oh yeah now I remember you...Mega Man
Mega Man: what are you guys doing here? Again
Tails: ugh I don't know, we were just entering a special stage and got a chaos emerald but as soon as we came out we woke up here.
Mega Man: well we need some serious answers. Maybe Dr. Light can help us
Sonic: I'm sure he's no where as smart as Tails though mega man
Tails: actually sonic, I don't have a clue how we got here, maybe we should see him and see what he knows

Minkey looking at many worlds with the charm: oh don't worry everyone, it'll all make sense in a few hours >:)
 
Chapter 8: Doomsday part 1: Is it too late?

March 15 2015, 9:34 AM. The docks
Pit: KINGZ!!!!!!!!!!!!
Link: GAMEGUY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mario: any sign of them?
Link: no and we've been searching all night.....where's Raf?
Mario: I don't know either! Oh no, all the kids are gone!
Link: I think their still out there, we just gotta keep searching
Pit: okay! I'll get a birds-eye-view in the sky
Link: okay and the 3 of us will search the ground. Come on guys we just gotta think, where haven't we checked at?
Mario:.......THE SEWERS!!!!!
Link: I know your a plumber and all but why would Minkey keep them down there?
Mario: because it's so OUT THERE, no one would ever think to look there but he never accounted for me
Link: alright let's search the sewers, their big so we may have to split up again
Mario: got it!
Kirby: POYO!

Meanwhile on the Empire State Building
March 15 2015, 10:01

Minkey: hahaha it's almost time, soon the charms power will be at its peak, then the gateway for anyone's wishes will be unlocked. I just gotta keep stimulating its power (Minkey using some sort of magic on the charm, making it go in the air and cause lightning strikes) HAHAHAHAHA this is it!
-bossblitz: uhh Minkey?
Minkey: WHAT THE FUCK IS IT!!! CANT YOU SEE IM BUSY!!!
-BossBlitz: uhh sorry sir, it's just that Mario and his pests are getting closer to Luma and Raf
Minkey: WELL DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT, I can't go anywhere until the key has enough Power, NOW MOVE!!
-BossBlitz: yummy..I MEAN YES SIR
=Near the building=
Mother4Ever: wha-what's happening to me...why are my hands glowing. Ugh I hope my arm gets better soon too but after that mind thing something weird is happening to me...maybe Luma will know what's up, I gotta find him. (Suddenly one of the lightning bolts nearly hits M4E but he dodges it) AGH what the....what's happening up there (more strikes falls near M4E but Kirby shows up and inhales them and turns into Spark Kirby)
Kirby: SPARK!!!
Mother4Ever: thanks dog....AGH YOUR NOT A DOG, WHAT ARE YOU!?
Kirby: KIRBY! :D
Mother4Ever:...w-well it's nice to meet you Kirby....thanks for saving me
Kirby: POYO
Mother4Ever: what's going on up there? It doesn't look good...maybe we should wait til luma gets here (Kirby grabs M4E and runs up the building) HEY W-WAIT!

Meanwhile in the sewers
March 15 2015, 12:03 PM
Mario: *huff*
Link: *huf*
Mario and Link: Hmm another path...
Link: oh fancy crossing into you finally but where's Kirby?
Mario: I don't know but hopefully he didn't get lost...there's another secret path right here, this has got to be the way to luma and the others
Mister Sushi: or your doom
BossBlitz: I wanted to say that :T
Mario: hey Aren't you the guy's that I heard over the phone....you guys ARE short
BB & Sushi: grrrr that's it, this place will be your grave!!
(Mario fights sushi and link fights BossBlitz in an Epic battle)
Luma:....huh?....(hears the battle) is that...MARIO AND LINK! GUYS WE'RE DOWN HERE CAN YOU HEAR ME (Still can hear the battle but no words) ugh we have got to get out of here. I can't wait any longer. Hmm vip said I have loads of power, okay I just gotta focus....focus... (Luma places his hands near the bars of his jail-cell and concentrates)
Mario: ha you guys sure are good for a couple of short rounds
Sushi: IF YOU SAY THAT ONE MORE TIME
Link: Mario that's it! They get distracted by taunts...hey BossBlitz, yummy yummy YUMMY
BossBlitz: LINK YOUR GONNA DIE!! DONT STEAL MY CATCHPHRASE :mad:
Mario: hey Mister Sushi, Ya know I always hated sushi
Sushi: NO WONDER I COULDNT TRUST YOU, MARIO ILL ENJOY KILLING YOU
(The battle continues but Now Mario and link taunt to break their concentration and end up defeating them)
BossBlitz: ugh...that sucked.....
Mister Sushi:...I'll say...we gotta get to Minkey....ugh
(They teleport away with only a few health left)
Mario: *huff* *huff* *huff* I..don't remember...them being so evil...I thought we got most of the children to safety
Link: we did but maybe Minkey or someone else got them
Mario: OH MY GOSH WE GOTTA GET LUMA
Luma: actually I let myself out
Mario: how did you...WAIT couldn't you do that a long time ago!?
Luma: hey I just now got that thought...you should see the door now....anyways Raf is still unconscious
Link: got him.....where's KINGZ and GameGuy?
Luma: I don't know, they only brought Raf here
(Earthquake)
Everyone: WHOAAAA
Luma: what's happening!!!?
Link: I think Minkey is trying to force the full power out of the UniverseKey. (More rumbling) if he does it then there's no telling what will happen or what he'll do!
Luma: well then we gotta get back up there and stop him!
Mario: maybe that's what Kirby is doing, we gotta help him!
(Rushes back up the surface)
Luma: okay we're heeEEEEEEERE (more rumbling)
Mario: AGH it's getting stronger
Pit: guys!! You found them!!! And I found Kirby climbing the Empire State Building with a boy. I think their trying to stop Minkey!
Mario: well we gotta help em before they get into crazy danger!
(Earthquake gets louder and harder, it caused craters to form in the city. The Lightning strikes get faster, the sky turned red and black, The charm is almost complete)
Minkey: YES!!! I CAN FEEL ITS POWER!!!! THIS FEELS AMAZING!!!!!!! (Minkey is glowing with a purple-blackish aura and has glowing red eyes, and took on a more hideous appearance with an evil deeper voice) HEHEHEHEHE ITS TOO LATE FOR YOU LUMA, THE POWER IS NOW MINE TO CONTROL! IN YOUR FACE!!!!!

=boarder of NYC=
???: .....whoa that doesn't look to good
(The boy is walking towards the city and sees 2 other boys washed up on shore)
???: huh?....Hmm so there are others out there
KINGZ: (opens his eyes slowly)....who...are you....
RobinFTW: my name is RobinFTW, your gonna be fine now
 
Chapter 9: Doomsday part 2: the final hour

March 15 2015, 1:00 PM the boarder line
GameGuy waking up: ugh man I can't believe those midgets got us... Huh, where are we?!
KINGZ: it's ok GameGuy, we're fine we're just in a campsite.
GameGuy: who the hell is that?!
RobinFTW: my name is RobinFTW and I traveled to NYC for a reason
GameGuy: and what might that be?
(Earthquakes reach them)
KINGZ: whoaaaaAAA
GameGuy: what the heck is happening!!?
RobinFTW: Minkey! He's gone insane with the power in the key, it might destroy him
KINGZ: wait didn't you just get here, how do you know this?
RobinFTW: I know more than you think
GameGuy: KINGZ, it sounds like they need help over there, we have to go and leave this guy behind
KINGZ: GameGuy he just saved us
RobinFTW: no it's ok, I have a different purpose anyway. We'll meet again soon, very soon
(King and GG run back into the city as fast as they can)

Meanwhile back in the action
Pit: WHOA, WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO MINKEY!?
Link: it looks like he's gone crazy with absolute power, the charm is too great for anyone do you see
Luna:...what about me? o_O that WOULD BE ME!?!?
Mario: of course not but can we ask questions later and get up there
(They start to climb the tall building but Minkey tries to get rid of them with many laser beams, but they dodge them...buildings begin to crumble as well)
Luna: ugh he's not letting up
Mario: well he is Minkey, we gotta keep climbing guys.
Link: ugh he's wrecking the entire city
Minkey: BECAUSE I KEEP MISSING YOU GUYS BUT THATS STILL GOOD, NOW PREPARED TO SEE THE TRUE POWER OF MINKEY!!! (Minkey fires a really gigantic laser at them now and destroys half the building, they break through a window in it and is safe)
Luma: Whoa...this guy is tough...how are we gonna beat him?
Mario: I...don't know
Link: I hate to say it but me too :(
Pit: ugh I can't believe he's won
RafalRib: did anyone notice me climbing but had no speaking part! Guys come on, don't give up. Don't forget we still have Luma
Luma: what am I suppose to do against THAT!?
ImpaDude: remember luma, you have just as much power than him, you just gotta find it
Luma: ImpaDude??? How did you get up here???
ImpaDude: duh I took the elevator
Everyone:...................... -________-
Luma:...well it's great that your here and all but I still don't know what the 6 of us can do to one powerful guy
Pit: 8 actually, Kirby and that kid are still climbing
Luma: wait...THEY ARE!? Did they NOT see what he can do!? Their DEAD
Mario: well then we better do something about it....we need a plan
Link: and we better hurry then, I don't know how long New York can hold up
/Everyone whispers/
Mother4Ever: okay kirby I think I can almost see the top, this is pretty scary :/
Spark Kirby: POYO poyo!!! (Spark Kirby keeps a electric barrier on them)
Mother4Ever: whoa, Kirby could you always do this!?
Spark Kirby: poyo!! :)
Mother4Ever: I'm gonna assume that's a yes. Your powers are cool!!
Minkey: UGH I DIDNT SEE YOU 2. SO MANY PESTS (fires a gigantic laser at them but Kirby discards his power to suck it up. He is Laser Kirby now)
Mother4Ever:......-_o....whoa for a second there I thought we were done for....hey you got another hat
Laser Kirby: LASER!!!
Mother4Ever: hey maybe we can use your hat thing to stop Minkey, let's get him
(Elevator opens on the top floor)
Luma: wow ImpaDude you were right, that is faster than climbing
ImpaDude: it wasn't that fast for us he just skipped a few hours in the chapter
Pit: again with the forth wall breaking
RafalRib: GUYS! Minkey is RIGHT THERE!
Link: it's over Minkey, we're all here and we're ready to stop you
Minkey: YOU STOP ME? DONT MAKE ME VOMIT
Luma: let's just show you then!
(Everyone gives everything they got at Minkey but prove to be far weaker, everyone is fallen but Luma is the only one left)
Luma: ugh....guys....guys?.....
Minkey: DIDNT I TELL YOU GUYS, YOU CANT STOP ME!!!! NOW THE WORLD WILL TRANSFORM INTO MINK!!!
(Minkey causes so much destruction to NYC causing buildings to crumble, the ocean to form tidal waves and meteors fall and earthquakes in other parts of the world and other world. Luma tries to get the UniverseKey from Minkey which is fused in him...)
Luma: ugh come on...Come on!...I almost got it....
Minkey: HA you think you got the charm, it's fused within me, we are combined into one now, and soon this world will be a world of mink!!
(Luma get blasted off him)
Luma: ugh man you are one annoying bad guy...(luma starts glowing with a golden aura and starts getting armor but is still the size of a child....luma didn't realize that instead of taking the charm, he absorbed some of its power)
Minkey: WHAT THE!?!?!?
Luma:....what are you staring at?.....O_O WHERE DID THIS STUFF COME FROM, WHATS GOING ON
Luma's voice changed: calm down luma, your just in a super armor formed by the charm
Luma: who are you
Luma's other voice: don't worry you'll find out overtime but for now, let's stop Minkey
Luma: Uhhh right...let's get him!...how will we do that?
Luma's other voice: just concentrate on your powers and you'll be fine in this form
Luma: uhh ok...I'll take your word for it....Let's just get him!!
(Luma and Minkey fight in an Epic battle between God-like creatures...the battle lasted for a while but then they fired 2 giant beams at each other, the beams went down and hit the ESB causing the building to fall with everyone still unconscious on it. Luma rushes in to save them but...)
Luma: *huff* *huff* that Takes care of Minkey....OH NO GUYS!!! IM COMING!!!
Minkey: AGH you will pay for that. (Fires a beam directly at Luma but RobinFTW shows up and uses his magic to counteract it, luma gets his friends but the 2 shoots form a blast so powerful that it would've killed them all, Luma used his powers and teleported away!)
Luma: WhOOOOOAAAAAA WHATS HAPPENING, WHERE ARE WE GOING...
(Everyone separates from each other and are zapped somewhere else. Luma, M4E, and Kirby wake up in a grassland area)
Luma: uggh my aching head...what the...what happened to my armor...what happened to the Charm...oh here it is...SWEET I GOT IT BACK!!!...but where are we?
RobinFTW: welcome to Nintendomain
 
Chapter 10: what is home?

In the other world
??? ??? ???, ??? Dimble wood

Luma: who are you? What's going on and how did the charm come back to me?
RobinFTW: it's nice to meet you, I'm RobinFTW
Luma: nice to meet you too, I'm..
RobinFTW: Everyday Luma, I know you. Your very famous among our world
Luma: so...this is the our world, the world I've been hearing about...but how did we end up here?
RobinFTW: it seems as though your power teleported us some where far away from danger, this was it
Luma: whoa, but how did I get the U.K. Back?
RobinFTW: something so evil and dark was taking it over, it needed a source of light and strength, something that knew love and good emotions, it left Minkey because he wasn't the one.
Luma: ok....(puts it back on) wait where is Minkey?
RobinFTW: don't know.......from what I can tell he is not in New York anymore but the city is returning back to normal
Luma: wait YOU CAN SEE NYC RIGHT NOW!?
RobinFTW: yes, you see, i am a Magic user and with magic you can do many things. Control fire and ice, look in the future, cast spells.
Mother4Ever: ugh what's happening?
Luma: we'll explain later but let's go home now
RobinFTW: it seems as though the charm is totally out of energy and needs to recharge, looks like your stuck here for a few days
Luma: well that's nice |:T well let's just look around and see what our home was

Meanwhile in the Koopa Airship
Bowser: UGH THAT MINKEY, HE WAS SUPPOSED TO TAKE ME WITH HIM, IF I EVER SEE HIM AGAIN ILL..
Peach: (sigh) hopefully mario is okay there....btw where are we going?
Bowser: oh sorry princess, we're just going for a little trip somewhere
???: somewhere close?
Bowser: who are you?
???: you don't recognize your own cousin? They were right, you are a dumbass
Bowser: you little brat! Who are you so I can roast you!
Spiny Bro: an everyday hammer brother...only I'm a Spiny Bro
Bowser: what the heck is a spiny bro?
Spiny Bro: -_- a Turtle with spikes are we done with stupid questions?
Peach: what do you want?
Spiny Bro: I just came here to say hello to my favorite cousin and....cousin?....well I love to stay and chat but I have a kid to find, see Ya dickheads
Bowser: GRRR don't come back!!
Peach: bowser can I leave :T
Bowser: oh sure you can...hey wait! Nice try princess, your not getting away that easily
Peach: fine....dumbass
Bowser: kammy koopa, anything new in the kingdoms yet? It seems as though the worlds are still merging
Kammy: nope nothing yet although I do see a lot of people teleporting in different areas, Ylisse, Green hill zone, Onett, Death Mountain, ITS CRAZY
Bowser:...wait...did you just say green hill zone?
Kammy: of course my lordship...why?
Bowser: the land isn't in Nintendomain...at all
Kammy: wait wha????
Peach: so it seems like other lands are coming too, if this keeps up itll lead to total chaos
Bowser: CHAOS??? Speak for yourself, I can rule a much bigger land now :D
Peach: DUDE! If too much lands pile on top of each other..BOOM!!!
Bowser:.....oh.....I see......well how do we stop it?
Peach: first let me out and I'll tell you
Bowser: fine but no tricks (let's peach out of here cage)
Peach: thank you....(jumps off the ship) WEEEEEEE LATER
Bowser: THAT LITTLE...GET HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
=on the ground of DK Jungle=
Peach: OK MAYBE JUMPING WAS A BAD IDE.UGH (falls in a tree) ouch...well at least they can't find me in all these trees....I need to get away from here and back to my castle
Villager: hi lady
Peach: ??? Kid what are you doing in the jungle, it isn't safe for little boys
Villager: I'm finding rare bugs and there's a lot here and last time I check, I got into smash bros no problem so save it missy
Peach: well excuse me!
Villager: why is a princess here?
Peach: I'm trying to get away from an evil turtle dragon thing..
Villager: if I was any younger I would believe that but I still do ;D can I help you?
Peach: uhh unless you know where I can rest and out of here, sure
Villager: perfect, okay there's a hotel not to far from here, let's go
Peach: this would be faster if we had a ride
Villager:.....hmmm you don't walk much do Ya? (Pounds a question mark block and an egg comes out, it cracks revealing Yoshi)
Villager: here ride this dinosaur....yoshi
Peach: phew, thank you. Okay now let's go

Meanwhile with Luma
Luma: man why is there so many platforming in this world, how do you guys live like this I'm tired!!
Mother4Ever: I think it's kinda fun
Kirby: POYO :D
Luma: yeah well I had enough of jumping and conveniently placed floating platforms
Mother4Ever: it wasn't that hard, come on luma
Luma: (sigh)....Hmm time seems to be the same here, it isn't slow or fast...also M4E why are your hands glowing?
Mother4Ever: hm? Oh I forgot. I don't know it's been doing this ever sense you guys cleared my mind
RobinFTW: your powers are activating that's why
Mother4Ever: I have powers???
RobinFTW: all of us do, you have psychics
Mother4Ever: psy-psychics??? Well how do I use them?
RobinFTW: we could practice really quick. The type of psychics you have is assistance and elemental, you need concentration to use them and you get easily distracted
Mother4Ever: hey! No I don't...aww look at kirby :D
RobinFTW: I rest my case
Luma: come on M4E you can do it, you were there for me and I'll be there for you
Mother4Ever: well...okay I guess. I need absolute quiet then
........................……......................................
Spiny Bro: HELLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone: AGHGHGHG
Luma: what the heck man!!! We're trying to help our friend
Spiny bro: OH SORRY!! WHAT ARE WE DOING!!!!!!
Luma: trying to SHUT YOU UP!!!!
Spiny Bro: WHYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
Luma: your annoying -_-
Spiny Bro: your a dick
Luma: your stupid
Spiny Bro: go suck my dick
Luma: WHAAAAAAAAT????
Spiny Bro: HA HA YOU IDIOT I'm here because I came to have some fun
Luma: by being a gay annoying fuck?
Spiny Bro: so close but no, I came to see my future enemies and well....not much of a challenge
Luma: future enemies?....wait....are you Minkey???
Spiny Bro: heck no, my name is Spiny Bro and this is Dickbot 3000
Luma: wait wha??
(A robot falls out of the sky)
Spiny bro: gotta run but fill free to trash them while I'm gone.
RobinFTW: great more trouble. M4E you keep concentrating while we deal with the Ro (gets smacked away) BOOOOOT!!!
Luma: I got this (luma tries attacking the robot)
Mother4Ever: guys I cannot concentrate with all this noise :/ could you quiet a bit
Luma, Robin, Kirby and the Dickbot: /whispers/ oh ok (attacks more quietly)
(The Dickbot fires a flamethrowers and kirby sucks it up, he becomes fire kirby. Luma and Robin are doing well against the robot)
Mother4Ever: ok....I think I got it!......( M4E Fires a huge FLASHING RAY ATTACK AT.....everyone accidentally, the robot explodes and everyone is wounded but still alive)
Luma: *huff* *huff* M4E WHAT THE HECK! GET THAT UNDER CONTROL NEXT TIME OUCH
Mother4Ever: sorry :/....I got the Robot though
RobinFTW: yeah that's great but now I think we should keep moving, we need a place to stay and I think I got the perfect place for people like you.
Luma: and where Is that?
RobinFTW: Mushroom City
Luma: A CITY!? SWEET LETS GO, I'm not exactly the outdoorsy type
Kirby: POYOOO!! :D
Mother4Ever: well what are we waiting for, let's go! (Shoots lightning out) O_O
Luma:...yeah..you gotta seriously work on your powers :p

Spiny bro behind a rock: and I gotta seriously spy on you guys
Minkey: geez if it wasn't for you I'd be in the river
Spiny bro: save it! (Puts a collar on Minkey then shocks him immediately)
Minkey: UGH what the heck is that!?
Spiny Bro: oh just a shock collar I borrowed from Mother 3. Listen Minkey, your gonna be my new minion and do whatever I say.
Minkey: and if I don't?
(He gets shocked again but with a higher voltage)
Spiny Bro: does that answer your question? oh and don't try taking that thing off, its permanently stuck to you until I take it off and I could set up the voltage to kill you instantly. Now let's go, we have work to do
 
Chapter 11: love Tri at an Angle

March 17 2015, 2:57 PM, Ylisstol
(ZAAAAP, Impa, Rosie, and Raf teleport in the sky and fall at an urban town)
ImpaDude: AHHHHHHHHH
Rosie: AHHHHHHHHH
RafalRib: YEAHHHHHHH
Everyone: UGHH
ImpaDude: ugh where are we?
RafalRib: WHO CARES, THAT WAS AWESOME!!! US TELEPORTING HERE AND FALLING OUT OF THE SKY LIKE THAT, even though the landing hurt
Rosie: oof, that was not awesome..
RafalRib: yeah impadude that was not Awesome
ImpaDude: Hmm, anyways let's just ask someone where we are...excuse me sir but what is this place?
Chrom: you mean you don't know what Ylisse is?
ImpaDude: oh my apologies Chrom.....CHROM!!!??? OHHHH we must be in the Fire Emblem Realm
Chrom: yes and I'm gonna assume you guys are outsiders (based on the clothes too) welcome tourist
RafalRib: tourist? We live on Nintendomain too but...circumstances were made for our absence
Chrom: Hmm I see? And we also noticed that the realms are merging into one. That means the Key was found....soon we'll all be able to go to Earth
ImpaDude: that is, if earth will even be okay with us
Chrom: you guys seem to have blended right in.
Rosie: well the fashion was so easy to copy..even if some of their clothes seem out of style
ImpaDude: anyways guys we need to look for the others and find a way back to Earth
Chrom: why would you wanna go back there? Isn't this your real home
ImpaDude: it may be but Earth was where we grew up at and where I found Rosie
Chrom: that may be true but everyone's real parents were here and they must miss you
Rosie: WHAAAAT!!?
RafalRib: WHAAAAAT?!!
ImpaDude: WHAAAAAT!?!
RafalRib: I have another HYPE mommy and daddy!?!?!?
Chrom: I thought you guys knew you had parents here.
ImpaDude: I thought we were all orphans???
Chrom: no, and if you guys still wanna go home then here's a map of the land
ImpaDude: thanks chrom...we'll think about it
Chrom: okay but if you guys change your mind then Ylisstol could be your new home
RafalRib: hey Rosie this place sure is romantic don't Ya think?
Rosie: yeah I guess. Ooo Impadude we should get something to eat, I wonder if the food here is good
RafalRib: maybe me and you could have a picnic somewhere
Rosie: yeah I guess we could
ImpaDude: Ooo Rosie you should try this stuff it's actually really good
Rosie: okay, coming!
RafalRib:....my poor hyper heart :(

Meanwhile at Dimble Wood
March 17 2015, 4:30 PM
Luma: RobinFTW are we almost there? I'm getting soooo tired
Mother4Ever: it is getting late :/
RobinFTW: calm down guys we should almost be out of here, hey haven't we passed this area before?
Luma: DO NOT TELL ME WEVE BEEN GOING IN CIRCLES!
Kirby: Poyooo :T
Mother4Ever: (sigh) we're lost, hungry, and tired....I guess we should set up camp again
Luma: and get some food...before one of us goes crazy
Kirby: Foooood :mad:
Mother4Ever: I see what you mean ._.
Luma: I guess me and Kirby will go hunt some food, you guys stay here and make the camp
RobinFTW: Okie dokie
Mother4Ever: okay luma
Kirby: we gonna get some FOOOOOOD
luma: ._.
RobinFTW: ._.
Mother4Ever: ._.
Spiny Bro: :)
Everyone: AGHGHGHG WHERE DID YOU COME FROM!?
Spiny bro: just wanted to check on my favorite team....team....whatever
Luma: sorry but we don't trust you
Spiny bro: well obviously, hey can I talk to YOU in private....you people really do stink though
Luma: well we haven't showered since we got here, we gotta...WAIT why am I telling you anything, you tried to kill us
Spiny bro: yes I know but I just wanted to know if you really got the power you know?
Luma: actually it was M4E who stopped your stupid Dickbot 3000
Spiny Bro: yeah yeah whatever, don't forget that little runt also hurt you guys in the process
Luma: that was an accident
Spiny bro: yeah but that kid could "accidentally" eliminate you guys one day, are you willing to risk that? You should just ditch him while you have the chance
Luma:.......he...
Spiny bro: well I see you have a choice to make well I'll leave you to it, bye bye for now!
Luma:....ugh even if M4E could kill us...we can't just ditch him...

In the morning
March 18 2015, 8:12 AM. Dimble Wood

Luma: (yawn)
RobinFTW: rise and shine....I uh hope you like fruit and eggs. That's all we found this morning
Luma: wait...I overslept?
RobinFTW: nah not really, we all just woke up early
Luma: well....we need to leave now
RobinFTW: don't you wanna eat first? Gotta keep your energy up
Luma: I'll be a lot fine once we get outta here....hey can't you teleport us out with your magic?
RobinFTW: well.....I could couldn't I. But it would take A lot of magic
Luma: okay okay but just do it
RobinFTW: why are you in such a hurry? Did spiny say something to you?
Luma:...it's just that...he said maybe we shouldn't have M4E around because he could be a danger to us, I believe him a little but M4E is our friend....I don't know what to do....
RobinFTW: hmm he is practicing his powers but whatever you do I will be onboard with it
Luma: :/ .........
Mother4Ever: hey guys! So are we leaving yet? I'm really pumped
Kirby: poyoo :D
Luma:......
RobinFTW:....yes we are, come on
Mother4Ever: luma? Are you okay?
Luma:....yes I'm fine, when we get there M4E we really need to train you to control your abilities
Mother4Ever: I know that, that's why I've been practicing all night check this out
(M4E does a lot of moves with his powers and he Shoots PK FIRE but...it also burns the woods)
Mother4Ever:....oops
Luma: M4E you just started a forest fire!
Mother4Ever: sorry, don't worry I'll fix it...
Luma: no, see your powers are way too unstable and out of control. No matter what you'll never control them and you shouldn't come with us anymore
Mother4Ever: wha-what!? Luma please I'll try harder I swear
RobinFTW: ok I'll fix this (Robin does a water spell and puts the whole fire out)
Mother4Ever: whoa that was AMAZING!.....Luma?...Robin?...Kirby?... ._.
(They teleport out thanks to Robin's magic)
Mother4Ever:....guys!?....I'm all alone again....In the deep dark woods....with EVIL TREES! AHHHHH!!!! (M4E runs more into the woods)
=in mushroom city=
RobinFTW: okay guy's we're here, Mushroom City
Luma: whoaaaa it's even prettier than I imagined
RobinFTW: you should see the play at night
Luma: so...where will we stay now?
RobinFTW: I guess we could stay in an apartment room but... We're kids
Luma: I'm sure we'll figure something out, come on let's explore our new home now
RobinFTW: okay... (Robin glares at luma with a disappointed look and luma is shocked)

Meanwhile back at Ylisstol in a house
ImpaDude: it's a good thing Chrom and his sister's let us stay here for the day
Rosie: yeah until we figure out what to do next
RafalRib: I THINK WE SHOULD FIND THE OTHERS AND MORE PEOPLE TO BUILD OUR OWN HYPE ARMY AND SAVE THE WORLD FROM ANY EVIL, WE'LL CALL OURSELVES TEAM HYPE AND ILL LEAD OUR TEAM BECAUSE IM THE HYPE GOD!!! HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA
Everyone:.........
ImpaDude: where did all of....that come from?
RafalRib: I thought of it :D
Rosie: I think it would be cool
RafalRib: r-really? :$
ImpaDude:...why are you blushing?
RafalRib: because it's hot..I mean she's hot..I mean I'm smoking hot...I MEAN I NEED SOME WATER AND FRESH HYPE
Impa & Rosie:.....hmmm
ImpaDude: well I think we should leave anyway
Rosie: Awww but Ylisse is so nice and that Chrom guy is kinda hunky :3
ImpaDude: hey!? I'm hunky too...
Rosie: lol silly let's pack our stuff
Spiny Bro: hmmmm I question ImpaDude's intelligence, you don't even look remotely hunky...HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I can't even say it with a straight face
ImpaDude: who are you?....evil...
Spiny Bro: I wouldn't say Evil, I'd say just being tough to handle with
Rosie: ok...and what do you want mr...?
Spiny Bro: Spiny Bro. At your disservice miss. I'm just here to let you guys know that I am the real person you should be worried about. I'm just telling YOU guys this because it makes this game so much more fun
ImpaDude:...game? What game?
Spiny Bro: a game I like to call, find the idiots. And your one of the playable characters
Rosie: playable characters?
Spiny Bro: that's right! And here's your boss fight for the day (the Dickbot 4000 crashes in the house) the Dickbot 4000!!!!
ImpaDude:....not gonna say anything about the name but what happened to 1000, 2000, and 3000?
Spiny Bro: oh those 2 were duds and 3000 got destroyed by your dick friends, well I'll let you guys have fun with it, bye bye for now y'all
ImpaDude: WAIT!.....ok...how are we supposed to fight this thing?
Rosie: simple babe. We hit it (Rosie and Impa attack the robot but are kinda beaten, then Raf shows up to save Rosie....and ImpaDude)
RafalRib: don't worry Rosie I gotcha
Rosie: aww that's sweet but can you put me down now :T
ImpaDude: yeah like right now!
RafalRib: oh uhh sorry....agh here it comes
(They attack the robot with everything they got. Raf happens to get caught under some rumble and Impadude caught in a rope trap and the robot is about to fire a laser at him)
Rosie: uhh what happened?
RafalRib: ugh I'm stuck, Rosie help me!!
Rosie: hang on Raf I'm coming..
ImpaDude: Rosie I'm stuck in this stupid trap ugh...uh oh...help me!
Rosie: uhhh uhhh
Impa & Raf: Rosie, Rosie...help me..please...come on... It's gonna crush me! he's gonna fire his LAZER!
Rosie: wha..who do I.....uhh...UHHH...
ImpaDude: I think he's done charging!
RafalRib: agh I'm gonna get crushed!
Rosie:..... (Rosie runs to one of them but couldn't save the other...)
 
Chapter 12: let the games begin

March 19 2015, 4:45 PM Rock Rock Mountain
GameGuy: man I forgotten how..grassy this world is, there's like forests everywhere
KINGZ: it's good to be back but I kinda miss all the "modern" things we had
GameGuy: I'm sure some places have cars and working phones and video games and other tech
KINGZ: yeah well tech aside, we gotta find the others. I'm sure they all landed here during the blast so they can't be too far
(Dickbot 5000 crashes down)
Spiny Bro: HELLO!!!! MORE PEOPLE TO TRY OUT ONE OF MY DICKBOTS
GameGuy: and just who is this gay bitch?
KINGZ: Dickbot???? What is wrong with you?
Spiny Bro: UGH it basically means KILL THE DICKS, BOT
GG & KINGZ:.....ohhhhhhh that makes...sorta sense.....HEY WE ARENT DICKS!!!!
Spiny Bro: yeah you guys keep thinking that, anyways have fun fighting it :p
KINGZ: grr we'll deal with him later, right now we gotta beat this thing
GameGuy: oh yeah. Another thing for me to nuke
(GG and KINGZ attack the robot with a well thought out strategy by King)
KINGZ: ha that wasn't too hard
Spiny Bro: wow I'm impressed, you guys took this one down much faster than the others
KINGZ: others? So they are here, why are you making us fight these robots
Spiny Bro: NO NO NO, NO SPOILERS FOR THE GAME!!!! Now then sense you 2 have much potential. It's time for the bonus round!
KINGZ & GG: Bonus round!!!???
GameGuy: I don't care if this is your bonus bitch! Your going down (jumps at Spiny and kicks but spiny teleports away, they also get transported in a white area with floating white blocks and colorful tiles)
GameGuy: what the what??? Where are we, and him!?
Spiny's voice: you guys are in my little world that my hypnotized friend created. It's a fun platforming world I like to call. THE DEATH DICK!!!
GameGuy: ok I'm getting the slightest feeling that your gay
KINGZ: me too
Spiny's voice: SHUT THE FUCK UP!!! YOUR ROUND BEGINS NOW. You have 30 minutes to make it out of this hallway OR YOU DIE!!! Your choice :D
KINGZ: man the swearing in this book is real :/
GameGuy: this should be a piece of cake (jumps from platform to platform but one disappears) AHHHHH
KINGZ: hang on GG (runs and catches GG)
GameGuy: ugh thanks [hmph I could've saved myself King]
KINGZ: come on, we should probably be more careful now. (KINGZ and GameGuy hurried to the end of the hallway)
GameGuy: ha! Is that all you got, Spiny Bastard. I haven't broke a sweat
Spiny's voice: oh that could be totally arranged you smart mouth
(The floor under them opens and they fall into a room full of lava)
GameGuy: oooh WHOA, that's hot
KINGZ: why are you doing this to us exactly!?
Spiny's voice: like I said, you 2 seem much more promising than the others and I wanna see what your made of now...climb to the top of this room before the lava rises too high and....GO!!
KNGZ: quick give me a boost
GameGuy: ugh this guy is seriously annoying, when are we gonna get the chance to kill him!?
KINGZ: uhh GameGuy?
GameGuy: What?
KINGZ: If you don't wanna get burned then I suggest climb and talk!
GameGuy: oh...OHHH IM COMING

Meanwhile in Ylisstol
March 19 2015, 6:31 PM

Rosie: IM COMING HANG ON..
RafalRib: OK, thanks Rosie :$
Rosie: do not mention it Romeo, now let's hurry and get Impa while there's still time
ImpaDude: NOOOOOOOOOOOO
(The dickbot 4000 fires an intense blast Directly at a tied up Impa)
Rosie: IMPADUDE!!!!!!!!!!!
Chrom: Sully, Virion, Frederick come on. we have to help them.
Frederick: yes milord but...what is that thing?
Chrom: a....Robot is what they call it
Sully: it looks like a Dickbot, well whatever its name is let's crush it anyway
(The 6 of them destroy the Dickbot and Rush impadude to Lissa to heal him)
Rosie:.......
RafalRib: hey Rosie
Rosie: hey Raf...I'm just still checking on Impadude
Lissa: don't worry I'm the best healer in Ylisstol so if you don't mind id like some peace to do this (Raf and Rosie leave)
RafalRib: so Rosie now that we're alone can I ask you something?
Rosie: what is it?
RafalRib: I don't get why you went to save me first
Rosie:....I don't know.....you seemed like...the right choice...
RafalRib: but...isn't impadude your boyfriend or something? :/
Rosie: I know I know, look I was a little dumb with that choice....NO OFFENSE!
RafalRib: it's ok Rosie, that would seem like a tough choice....well I'm gonna get out of your hair for a second....may the HYPE be with you...and stuff :$
Rosie: heh heh...yeah......

Meanwhile back with KINGZ and GG
March 19 2015, 7:45
KINGZ: phew I actually made it out of that room...it was a tough puzzle, I wonder if..
GameGuy: I MADE IT OUT. Really spiny bastard? If you think separating us would be enough than think again
Spiny's voice: hmm okay...yes... How about this!
(GG and KINGZ are in a big arena)
Spiny's voice: okay then, the last round of this game. You 2 are gonna fight each other!!!!
GameGuy: WHAT!? I'm not fighting him I'd crush King
KINGZ: yeah....hey!!! Anyways what if we refuse
Spiny's voice: that's an easy answer, then you die where you stand, either fight or die, whoever is still alive at the end will leave together. Now BEGIN!!!!!
KINGZ: GameGuy your not really gonna fight me are you?
GameGuy: we don't have a choice, I'm sorry King I really am
KINGZ: me too
(KINGZ and GameGuy both fight a really intense battle, thanks to KINGZ's quick thinking and skills he tricks GG a lot but GameGuy has strength and defense so he hurts KINGZ hard.
KINGZ: *huff* I forgot how good GameGuy was... Well he won't trip me up so easily
GameGuy: ugh I forgot how annoying KINGZ was but I can't give up
(The 2 actually pull off one final blow at each other but In the end the winner is GameGuy)
GameGuy: ow, told Ya I'd crush Ya King
Spiny's voice: wow that was a really nice show you put on. Ok. You guys are free to go (spiny teleports them out but their both badly hurt)
GameGuy: ugh finally we're out!...uh listen King I'm sorry for beating you
KINGZ: It's...ok.....I'm not that beaten up....but we need to heal up
GameGuy: AGH, damn I think you..broke my arm and leg during that....
KINGZ: it's ok buddy I gotcha...let's go find the others now
GameGuy: thanks...King
Spiny Bro: hmph okay now that they all fought my Dickbots I can actually create a better model using their skills they copied during the fights. (Spiny takes the recording chips from all 3 Dickbots)
Minkey: so you mean all this time you've been recording their moves with them? Very nice
Spiny Bro: I know, now say hello to DickAndroid. a kid sized Powerful robot with the skills of all the special children.
Minkey: hmm nice but who do we test it on?
Spiny Bro: hmm we can test him on....Luma
Minkey: sweet. That runt will pay for what he did to me
Spiny Bro: then why don't the 3 of us fight them
Minkey: sounds like a plan >:)

Meanwhile in Mushroom City
March 19 2015 8:30 PM
Luma: this place is nice and all but it still feels lonely..
Kirby: poyo :(
RobinFTW: hey guys! I know a place we can stay for the night!
Luma: where?
RobinFTW: it's a nice sweet some man is letting us stay in, he says he knows you Luma.
Luma:....uhhhh? What?
RobinFTW: let's just take this offer while we have the chance ok? We have nowhere else to stay for now and sleeping under the highway was not pretty
Luma: so sleeping with some random guy is exactly safer?
RobinFTW:......I guess when you say it like that...
Luma: right so let's keep a close eye on whoever this is
RobinFTW: okay
Kirby: Poyo
RobinFTW: this is the place
Luma: hmm it seems pretty nice
???: oh you guys made it....hi Luma
Luma:....hi?...
???: you don't remember me?
Luma: am I suppose too?
???: you know you have your mothers attitude but not her looks
Luma: wait how do you know my Mom! Unless...........it can't be...........DAD!?!?!?
Robin and Kirby: :O

Spiny Bro seeing them through his mind: so...their staying in mushroom city, let's pay them a little visit shall we?
DickAndroid: affirmative sir
Spiny Bro: hey this one can talk, how nice
Minkey: oh brother, so when do we get the drop on them....hey one of them is missing
Spiny Bro: patients and Ooo it seems that luma ditched him after all. That makes the game so much easier...for us, we attack them in a Day
Minkey: why!? I wanna attack them now!!!
(Spiny hypnotizes Minkey)
Spiny Bro: yeah I took the collar off and replaced it with this, it's so much more enjoyable, now.....do as I say or I will snap your head
Minkey: yes spiny
 
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