How'd you feel about it for story? Fun enough? What things would you have changed?
Personally, I think this was a really cool story, and there were even parts I found... amusing! Peach especially seemed to make "silent jokes" in it, heh.
Personally, I think this was a really cool story, and there were even parts I found... amusing! Peach especially seemed to make "silent jokes" in it, heh.